What They Do in the Dark: Part 2

[miribai]

 The follow up to What They Do in the Dark.

“K-Katara!” Zuko cried out, his body tensing up so strongly his back almost broke itself in half. Wispy plumes of smoke curled from his nose and mouth and the Fire Lord collapsed onto a body belonging to someone most certainly not named Katara.

Mai shuddered deeply, her own climax coming in a much quieter

Comments

[inhisxeyes]

Lovely. :D

[vejibra]

So.. they are seeing somebody else in their minds.. jeje make a third part when the two each another!!... lust, desire, infidelity. it looks so good.

[shalei]

we need a third part! >3 kidding. :P
anyhow, this was written well. i felt mai's pain, really. poor mai but i think she saw it coming.

it would be great if after all those things, mai would be the one to bring zuko and katara together despite everything else. it would be bittersweet >3

[flamable_jen]

Xd zomg so cool!! hehe oh zuzu you naughty boy. Blegh Mai i do not pity you in the least , sorry i just really do not like Mai at all, neer liked her!