キャビンボーイ: プロローグ Cabin Boys: Prologue

[zxcvbnm109]

A bolt of lightning screeched over the gray, abyss sky.  Rain poured down over the little fishing boat like a waterfall.  The dark waters of the rough sea shook the boat as a rollercoaster.

“Yabu!  Get into the boat’s cabin!  It’s a big storm!”

The young teen obeyed the old man’s orders.  “Hai!”

Yabu ran into the stern.  A big wave

Comments

[joey4100]

this prologue really make me feel so interested!!
keep up the good work!! ganbare!!! i really love your fics!!^^

[zxcvbnm109]

thx! I think that the prologue was sucessful if you said that it's interesting! YAY! :) I'm flattered...lol...xD

thx 4 reading and commenting! :)

[replay_dolly]

The prologue is promising. I'll be waiting for the next chapters ^^

[zxcvbnm109]

glad you liked it...I'm working it on it now! :)

thx 4 reading and commenting! :)

[bowsie22]

OH, I like so far. It's interesting. Can't wait for the next update :D

[zxcvbnm109]

thx! it's just been updated...srry 4 the late reply, I was battling some bug when I posted in rich text, but now it's ok, cuz I used a client...damn rich text!

thx 4 reading and commenting! :)