some fiction.

Mar 15, 2005 16:57

I felt like writing some fiction. It would be kind of like cute women chick-lit but it's not cute enough. I wish this LJ's background hadn't fucked up. Oh well.

i was searching through my pockets... )

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nothingtodowith March 15 2005, 22:51:16 UTC
That was excellent.

I remember when I turned twenty years ago and thinking, "I'm not ready to be in my twenties." I've got some years to go before I'm in my thirties but I'm still going through life thinking sometimes, "I'm not ready to be in my thirties."

Excellent.

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exit__music March 15 2005, 23:50:55 UTC
hmm. i like this. the shadow of things that could be/might be. very full with possibility, but melancholy at the same time.

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anjali_organna March 16 2005, 03:13:07 UTC


Oh man. Hell yes.

"No, I just want to fuck Muller," I said. "Look, I'm not a bad person. I'm just saying that if I had met Muller first, things would be different, kind of. But I'm not going to cheat on Pete."

Totally not any of my business, but I was just wondering where this whole part came from. Just because it seems sort of divergent from the begining...

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0100111 March 17 2005, 04:57:19 UTC
Like, I look at this as part of a larger story even though this is probably the only part I'll write. I talk about the disillusionment that comes with getting older and getting more used to things, and some of the shit things that happen when you become disillusioned and bored. So, Muller's like one of those things.

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anjali_organna March 17 2005, 18:17:56 UTC
Hmm, okay. I was just wondering if this started out as something that morphed into something else, if that makes sense.

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0100111 March 17 2005, 18:43:55 UTC
I wanted to mesh the two things under one cohesive theme of ennui. But, y'know. Oh well.

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