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0100111

because fiction is the science of

Apr 26, 2005 19:49

I wrote something about these three young people at one of the young people's summer house on a fictional island down the Cape. I started writing the second part in econ class today because fuck you, econ. Not that this going to be a chronological series, really. I'll tinker around exploring these folks and life on the island, trying to ( Read more... )

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exit__music April 27 2005, 00:53:25 UTC

i do miss your writing. the rhythm of it. i think i spelled that damn word wrong again.

0100111 April 27 2005, 03:00:51 UTC

Nope, nope, you spelled it right.

:-*

You may possibly see more of the writing. I am on a sort-of quest to reclaim my muse!

exit__music April 27 2005, 04:00:14 UTC

score. i should do that too, i've sort of fallen out of it all. which is funny since i'm a creative writing major and that's, you know, what we HAVE to do.

just lacking inspiration. glad to see you're trying to find yours.

lingbo April 27 2005, 01:30:23 UTC

Oh gaaah. I love way Maria narrates it, and the little moments like this:

swimming after him like the world was a strange aquatic pastoral scene ... spliced figments of your imagination, rendered ethereal by dreams and the glitter on the surface of the water.

The dialogue feels so natural and not forced at all. I haven't written a review in forever, so forgive me, but I liked this a lot. It feels... real, you know? :)

(this is eva_c in case I haven't mentioned that already)

0100111 April 27 2005, 03:02:42 UTC

I'm glad you like it! That makes me do this-- :-).

Dude, I know who you are. This makes me wonder: do you know that downtheavenue is my messy RL incarnation?

lingbo April 27 2005, 20:17:12 UTC

Okay, that called for a headdesk. Now I am enlightened.

saladbar April 28 2005, 15:38:51 UTC

This is incredibly good stuff.

If you are ever bored out of your ever-loving mind you can read my stuff at humminggirl

0100111 April 29 2005, 16:14:45 UTC

Thanks. And thanks. :)

00101000 May 4 2005, 03:42:37 UTC

i like this.

human_celluloid June 9 2005, 16:41:41 UTC

They were climbing back down off the roof onto the balcony when Frankie said, "I thought you loved him."

"Who?" said Maria.

"Doug."

"I do."

"Oh," he said, nodding with comical sagacity. "I see." Then, "'Cos... Good, 'cos I don't, like, then I don't think you should fall in love with me. Or--"

"What?"

"Or whatever." He shook his head, as if confused by what he just said. "I dunno. Whatever." Then, "Let's raid the groceries."

^^^That's my favourite part of that (splendid) piece of writing. I write too; you can catch Chapter 16 of my current novel-in-progress on my LJ Diary (very recent); sorry, I don't know how to post links in replies. I could fiddle about with it and such, but I'm lazy right now.