Eeeeew! Gross! Gross! Gross! That part when s/he cuts open his/her chest had me hanging on your every word. I had to read that last part twice to understand it. It really does sound like it was being thought by someone who was about to die.
To quote Inspector Gadget: Wowzers! Really great job. The ending like a prayer was inspired truly. I wish I were a better poet (sort of a nonsequiter but who really cares?)
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That part when s/he cuts open his/her chest had me hanging on your every word.
I had to read that last part twice to understand it. It really does sound like it was being thought by someone who was about to die.
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Such a presumptuous thing, really.
Nice work.
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