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0creativity

Feels More True with Each Line

Jun 10, 2005 16:43

Title: Falling Away with You
Author: 0creativity
Part: 2 of 9
Rating: PG13 to R
Summary: Greg doesn't know what he's doing anymore.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
A/N: See my notes at the beginning of Chapter One.

( Chapter Two )

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Comments 6

We want more shacky20 June 10 2005, 23:07:40 UTC

No NO NO, you can't leave it there. What happens over the summer, Nick said he loved him, and Greg is still sitting there. When will we get more, and poking just means I really really love it, it's a sign of affection, trust me.

squara June 11 2005, 04:16:02 UTC

Greg wipes some tears away with the back of his free hand. “I know it’s way too soon to be thinking in terms of love, but Papa Olaf used to tell me not to be selfish when it came to relationships. He said it wasn’t fair to the other person to make them wait for you to make a move because then by the time you end up doing something it could be too late. They might have already moved on and then somewhere down the line you’ll be looking at what could have been and asking yourself which one could have been love.”

This is why I <3 Papa Olaf.
I am almost in this exact situation right now, so you really struck a chord with me. So fantastic...can't wait for more chapters!

thefieldmouse June 11 2005, 04:35:29 UTC

Wow, awesome job! Can't wait for the next part.

fred_bear June 12 2005, 01:31:11 UTC

“I love you,” Nick whispers.

When Greg opens his eyes, Nick is gone.

Awwww, I want to hug them both so much right now. Can't wait to read Chapter 3!

flipflopadd1ct June 12 2005, 01:48:56 UTC

You said you were nervous about posting this, but it's really good!!! I can't wait to read chapter 3 which, luckily, I can read now. Yay!

Falling Away with You donnab810 July 3 2007, 08:12:50 UTC

Ahhhh so much angst, so much emmotion. PERFECT.