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The Man You Were

Jun 21, 2005 18:16

Title: Falling Away with You
Author: 0creativity
Part: 9 of 9
Rating: R for language
Summary: Set after Grave Danger. That should give you an idea.
Spoilers: Grave Danger
Disclaimer: I don't own anything

( Chapter Nine )

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Comments 13

shacky20 June 21 2005, 23:45:51 UTC

Wow, what a great last chapter, remembering what brought you together in the first place, those are the reason you stay together for the long haul, and Nick almost dying made them both remember why they loved each other, and then recapping their little firsts was a sweet touch, and picking up the pieces one by one, yeah it doesn't happen overnight, takes time, and I like how you do that slowly, and they didn't give up and are still together, now I can think of their happy days when I see them together. Great job Matt, you should be so proud of your work, great job.

sheryden June 21 2005, 23:50:27 UTC

When Greg found himself at a funeral, I was like, "This damn well better be a dream." Good, as always. My favorite line:

“Alive,” is all he says, but it causes Greg to breakdown anyway.

fred_bear June 22 2005, 00:02:38 UTC

Zero, you almost killed me with that fakeout! he can feel one of those millions of tiny pieces being picked up and put back in its place. And he thinks that maybe, just maybe, someday he’ll be whole again. what a beautiful way to end a wonderful story.

thefieldmouse June 22 2005, 00:56:02 UTC

Wonderful job, Zero!

saebuffyboy June 22 2005, 01:16:34 UTC

First off, you're very welcome. I was more than happy to help, and will be happy to at any point in the future. Secondly, you did such a marvelous job on this fic. This last chapter brought your story full circle, which is perfect. I have loved this entire story, there isn't a moment that i didn't. I honestly can't wait to see what you do next. Becasue there will be a next. And it will be every bit as awesome as this was. Congratulations.