The Man You Were

Jun 21, 2005 18:16

Title: Falling Away with You
Author: 0creativity
Part: 9 of 9
Rating: R for language
Summary: Set after Grave Danger. That should give you an idea.
Spoilers: Grave Danger
Disclaimer: I don't own anything

Chapter Nine )

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squara June 22 2005, 03:47:55 UTC
I almost had a heart attack when I began reading the dream part. But I knew you wouldnt be that mean to us!! This was great. I cant wait to read your next one.

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flipflopadd1ct June 22 2005, 03:50:23 UTC
Oh my heck, you scared me! I wasn't expecting to see dead!Nick but at least that wasn't real, lol. This was a great ending to a wonderful story. I can't believe this was your first fic but I can't wait to read more from you! *applauds*

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stinkymonz June 22 2005, 07:44:35 UTC
Wow, wonderful! Absolutely brilliant! I was actually quite ready to believe the funeral, especially with how you grave you made Nick to be.

But through the entire thing it was great, because you made them to be together all the way from high school and getting all the way to this, it just makes it so much better and deeper. And you made everything really hopeless in Chapter 8.

Congratulations for your first fic; it's quite a surprise to me that it's your first. Here's waiting for your next masterpiece.

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csi_freak15 June 22 2005, 13:46:10 UTC
Zero...I loved this...honestly and completely. Soooooooo good. I'm gonna read it again!

ctx :D

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sblomie_girl June 22 2005, 15:50:33 UTC
do you know how evil you are? making us think Nick was dead was very, very evil! the bit where Greg's lookin down at the coffin the coffin was so sad, but the ending wherehe's remembering their firsts was kinda sweet so it made up for it.
am lookin forward to readin more by you!

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