Everyone's a Critic

[108am]

Fandom: U-KISS
Rating: PG
Genre: Crack
Pairing: Alexander/Kevin
Word Count: 809
Summary: Kevin writes a story, Alexander is not pleased.

Theme: 33. Not Yet Rated

Author's Note: Started out as something ridiculous a writing exercise, became something indescribable instead. I'm...slightly ashamed. /rolls around

Comments

[rilakkiseop]

I...I...I can't even begin to describe how much this made me laugh. Ohmygod. I can't even. This was hilarious. You had me laughing since the beginning LOL
I'm gonna reread this right now xD

[y0naki_x3]

XD I-I'm flattered! Thank you for reading~

[brandnewwind]

DSFKSDJFHLSKJFHLSKDJFHLSKDJFHLJKF /breathes.
This is genius. Absolutely genius. If I were to quote my favorite parts (title included), I'd seriously paste the entire fic here OMG.
Perfect. ♥
Kevin's indeed a brilliant writer, I'm in love with his plot. And he and Xander are so adorable ;__;

Uh, sure Alexander dies in both versions, but, well, Kiseop's a chinchilla. Everything's alright ♥
Thanks for sharing :3

[y0naki_x3]

lololol, Xander's a bad influence on Kevin's creativity. W-wellllllllll, walking off a cliff doesn't necessarily equal death...especially considering Kevin's logic of life and death in his story. =o=

Thank you for reading! ^^

[s2_otter]

Kevin is incredible, I swear /bows to the god with the magical mushrooms

And this is pure genius, you never fail to amaze me, seriously.
Remember the other time I said I remember all your plots because they're all too damn memorable? Well this just went in with it.

It's so short I wish we could read Kevin's story as a sequel or something XD!
What's with Kevin making people die lolololol.
Eli being haunted by Soohyun /dying forever

“I died. How is that a conflict?”

Kevin blinked a few times. “The other characters need to figure out how you had died.”

KEVIN'S AWESOME, IDEK <3
AND YOU'RE EVEN BETTER /dyingdyingdying

THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR GENIUS <3

[y0naki_x3]

It was supposed to be longer. But it was too ridiculous and out of hand and I didn't know what to do with it, so... orz

What's with Kevin making people die lolololol.

He, um, likes playing God with people's lives. =o=;;
And I love the idea of Soohyun haunting people, especially Eli. Like making rattling and moaning sounds while Eli is making a trip to the bathroom at night, lmao

Aww, thank you always for your flattering comments. :D

[s2_otter]

HAHAHAH, go on with the ridiculousness XD

LOLOLOLOL. I hope he's not a total sadist then :3. I mean, at least he has mushrooms to revive them lolol.
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA, that'd make Eli pee in his pants lol, so bad. XD
And then comes Dongho that walks in nonchalantly and saying "Hi" to Soohyun lolololol.

<3

[y0naki_x3]

Well, the biggest problem was trying to figure out how to put it into words and, um, get the image across, because, well...the thing in my head is downright silly and ridiculous. orz

Nahh, he's just having fun getting back at those who usually prank him. XD;;

And then comes Dongho that walks in nonchalantly and saying "Hi" to Soohyun lolololol.

Dying, omg, just dying at this image. I can see it happening...with the addition of chinchilla!Kiseop on Dongho's head. 8D

[volatileflame]

this was hilarious XD

[y0naki_x3]

Thank you for reading this~ XD;

[ext_681672]

Can you generously donate your brain to me? I want to see what goes on in the ingenious brain of yours LOL.

I saw your latest fic (which was the one about Kevin being a hamster) and fell in love with your writing so now I'm gonna backtrack all your fics hehehe. So don't mind me if you get an influx of comments.

Anywaaaaay, Kevin and his mushrooms omg. I would really like to see how Kevin's story turns out. It's gonna be epic man!!

[y0naki_x3]

This ol' brain? At the moment, it's overrun by Digimon. ... I have a one-track mind, and then I get distracted. orz

Thank you for reading my stories! Hehehe, Kevin's story...is actually something I've been working on for the past month. My motivation/interest just kind of dwindled towards the last part of the story, but once I get back on track, I'll post it to this LJ! :3