A Time For Us Part 1 .. Nuke's Love Shack Mini Big Bang 2013

[123cariad]

Comments

[wheelie47]

Ah Stella! Such an excellent start. You know how much I love this story! I love your descriptive style of writing. It paints such a vivid picture in my mind so I could really feel Noah's emotions.

Poor Noah - he knows deep down what he wants and who he is. But is he brave enough to admit it?

[123cariad]

Aww Anne thank you so much you have been amazing .. you help has been invaluable xxx

[valenti1965]

1st off - Stella your artwork is stunning!

2nd off - Right back at you for all the support and friendship you give me. <3<3<3

3rd off - As well as a very talented artist - you are a very talented writer. I loved seeing Noah's pov of how he has come to realise...yeah with Luke at his side..he is indeed in the right place.

Stunning chapter Stella. I don't know why you have doubts about your writing...at all. xxx

[123cariad]

1.... Thank, you so happy you loved the art I very fond of number one no clue why lol ..

2.... Could not do any of theses stories with out your support and confidence in me <3

3... Thank you Thank you Thank you I am so happy you loved the story it means so much that you enjoyed reading it xx

[sarahsezlove]

You create such beautiful imagery, Stella.
Simply gorgeous.

[123cariad]

Sarah Thank you for taking the time to read and for your wonderful comment xxx

[jb1183]

Yay, Stella! This is excellent so far! You write with such empathy for Noah that the reader can't help but feel for him even as we are frustrated that he's not letting himself have who and what he most wants. And I love the strong, confident Luke here. Will be interesting when we get his POV. Excellent start!

[123cariad]

Jim !! Thank you this comment is so lovely I truly appreciate the time you have taken to read it xxx

[appassionata1]

Beautiful start. I love the imagery and descriptive writing. Your dialogue is spot on, conveying their emotions perfectly.

[123cariad]

Thank you Faye for your kind words x