Comments | 12thgrave: 思い出 ||{omoide.:.Memories}||

12thgrave

思い出 ||{omoide.:.Memories}||

Feb 14, 2010 23:17

Title: 思い出 ||{omoide.:.Memories}||
Genre: Angst, Romance
Main Pairing: Ruki x Reita
Rating: R
Warning: D.A.R.E people, Don't do drugs. (And don't cheat either)
Disclaimer: Mommy said pets don't include sexy men with kitty-ears on...
Summary: It seemed fate had turned its cold, cold shoulder on the small man, distressed in the bathroom, who ( Read more... )

oneshot, the gazette

Comments 10

miyabi_is_dead February 15 2010, 05:06:39 UTC

*flails*

oh wow... I loved it...seriously...

I loved how you conveyed Ruki's feelings perfectly into words <3 <3 <3

And for reita....... I really think he deserved that sight... *nods*

12thgrave February 15 2010, 10:58:59 UTC

thank you very much for commenting and reading...
well, he might or might have not. I dunno, but I know Poe-san would have done it XD

redeemeroflight February 15 2010, 08:56:35 UTC

X-x poor thing!!!* Huggs* loved it.so sad *hugs*

12thgrave February 15 2010, 10:59:21 UTC

*returns hugs by a thousdand* thank you very much for reading ^.^

xmirukiix February 15 2010, 11:34:37 UTC

wAS this a oneshot? x( damn...ruki died then. I was hoping Reita would get there in time to save him.
Beautifully written though (if that's even a word) <3

12thgrave February 15 2010, 19:31:08 UTC

yeah, it was... Sorry, I don't think a squeal would be easy though lol
And thank you ^.^

xmirukiix February 16 2010, 16:13:52 UTC

if Reita got in time to call for an ambulance it would be a great sequel :D
But he already died so XD and it's okay, it was good anyway :) You're welcome

eilonwe2 September 30 2012, 21:18:39 UTC

On the one hand I've been in Ruki's shoes but for worse reasons. At the time there seemed no other way out of the oubliette into which I had been dropped. I survived my mistake obviously - though the recovery was its own level of hell. I've determined I will never give up like that again. I feel bad for Reita,because obviously he cared enough to kick in the door... But not enough to get there sooner. Not enough to be honest, and break things off- to say that he had met someone else .

I feel worse for Ruki, that he didn't say anything about how much Reitas infidelity hurt him. That he just let the pain shatter him.

Yeah, valentines is filled with terrible memories. So it's not really a holiday I celebrate much. Thank you for this powerful story.

12thgrave January 25 2013, 05:29:07 UTC

(This is a very late reply because I don't come on LJ as much as I used to) but thank you for taking the time to read this very old one shot of mine! It does mean so much to me. Normally I would reply with what I was thinking when I wrote this but, jeez, it has been almost 3 years since I posted and wrote this. I am sorry for any wrong that has happened to you on/ near this holiday, but I do gratefully thank you for letting this touch you. :)

eilonwe2 February 5 2013, 13:50:03 UTC

your very welcome for the feedback. I guess, Valentines Day just kind of lost it's luster and meaning for me. I like the chocolate and the red hots cinnamon candies and that's about it. I think I would prefer to celebrate "White day" as my new holiday to appreciate someone I like. I've been alone for so long now though, if I did meet someone and they wanted to celebrate Valentine's I suppose I'd be more into it, at least for their sake. But seeing as how I'm alone, not so much ( ... )