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FIC: Divergence 26b/28

Jul 19, 2010 19:32

USS Enterprise, Sickbay, year 2246

Spock woke up slowly, coming to consciousness in the dim night illumination of sickbay. His head ached terribly; it felt like someone was sitting on his chest, and his hands hurt. He tried to get up but found that he barely had the strength to lift his head. Trying to roll onto his side made him gasp for air, and a ( Read more... )

epic-fic:divergence, genre: alternate universe, pairing: kirk/spock, fanfiction

Comments 54

davincis_girl August 1 2010, 01:58:06 UTC

Brilliant! I can't wait to see what Serek has to say about this.

littlebirdtold August 10 2010, 20:56:25 UTC

I rarely read WIPs, but yours sucked me in from the very few paragraphs. Wonderful story. I love your kid!Spock and kid!Kirk, the way you write, the amount of emotion, suspense and intensity and feeling you put into your work. I could almost see the whole thing play out in front of me. Can't wait to read new chapters.

13empress August 11 2010, 01:36:43 UTC

Thank you so much for reading my WIP then :)
I've been having a real downer with writing due to health issues and so on, and your comment is real encouraging.

rassatar August 19 2010, 05:35:05 UTC

Yay more story! \0/

And if they're all really that close together, little Spock is going to greet his father with "Commodore Winona Kirk of the United Federation of Planets, Starfleet, dammit!" (heh I love that line) standing over their shoulders and asking what the hell the Vulcans think they are doing... whether they approve or disapprove of young Spocks' bonding. She just wants to know what the hell is going on. *grins* :D I'm almost sorry that it's almost over. Are you planning a sequel?

13empress August 20 2010, 03:44:08 UTC

LOL you're almost sorry it's almost over? I'm GLAD!
But YES, there is a sequel set a few years later in this AU, which I'm attempting to write for the STBIGBANG. Is exhausting. Has Spock graduated from Starfleet and Kirk as a third year cadet, about to finish, and involves space pirates.

rassatar August 20 2010, 06:07:33 UTC

WOOHOOO!!! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

And space pirates are always good. :D

clairshadows September 8 2010, 12:09:38 UTC

I love this universe and am eagerly awaiting the confrontation between little Spock and his father about little Jim and imagining the look on Winona's face when he declare's his intention of keeping him :)

Part 26=amazing, part 27=please? anonymous November 5 2010, 01:12:45 UTC

As great as the first 25 parts - and that is saying something.

I read the rest of the comments, and I hope you're feeling better (and not just because I'm waiting with bated breath for part 27).

This story is one of my all-time favorites. I hope you see it through to the end.

Re: Part 26=amazing, part 27=please? 13empress November 5 2010, 17:46:48 UTC

Thanks for commenting :)
Oh yes, been real unwell recently so lol err thanks for looking around my lj and seeing those posted comments
I'll see it through - honestly, I had blocked out the last parts with my beta already, so it was ready to be written... but as you can see, RL can really take it out of you. Thanks for letting me know you are waiting though, lol I feel quite compelled by the multiple comments for me to finish it