USS Enterprise, Sickbay, year 2246
Spock woke up slowly, coming to consciousness in the dim night illumination of sickbay. His head ached terribly; it felt like someone was sitting on his chest, and his hands hurt. He tried to get up but found that he barely had the strength to lift his head. Trying to roll onto his side made him gasp for air, and a
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I know how the story ends and have the summary done but I have been so unwell that i just can't muster up any energy to do anything - sorry, guess that doesn't really answer your question :/
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I started writing this fic before surgery and then in recovery but my health issues are not over - I actually desperately want to finish but unless I want to get yelled at by my doctor I cannot write until I am completely well; he says my brain sucks up all my energy when it should be going towards my body :)
Thanks for reminding me though
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--Trekker
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I like how you have the characters uneasy with different timelines' versions of themselves; it definitely brings out that it would be an awkward situation!
Overall, this story was a great thrill ride with tight pacing and plotting. I really enjoyed this read. Thanks! I do hope there will be more in future because you're so gifted at writing and I feel invested in this world now :)
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I'm so sorry for replying late - I don't sign on a lot to LJ right now so your comment was such a nice surprise
I love action in scifi! I hope it showed in my writing of it lol -- hmm tips? Watch a lot of action, know what you like, and read a few star trek novels? I mashed together some of my favorite action scenes in my work
I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far. Yes I do plan on finishing this story. There's a sequel planned and partially written waiting too, if I ever get better enough to continue it.
Again thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment :)
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