Title: Encantamiento Inútil
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148kmFandom: alice nine. (also features Sugimoto Yoshinori and THE KIDDIE)
Pairing: Tora/Shou, one-sided Tora/Hiroto, Yoshinori/Nao
Rating: R
Genre: AU
Warnings: Vampires, RPS, male/male, violence, language, failure to secure a beta reader
Chapter: 7 [
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Summary: For once, Shou was glad that Tora was such a
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First off I have to say I LOVE the way you added in THE KIDDIE. I especially love how they were referred to as 'the kiddies.' That was so perfect! I know this is a Tora/Shou fic, but this chapter really made me long for some KIDDIE fic lol.
But ANYWAYS! Wonderful, brilliant, excellent chapter. I think it really felt balanced with all the relationship development between Nao and Yoshinori and the playfulness between Tora and Shou and the cats versus the intense foreshadowing of Saga's call and the promise of more action to come with the confrontation. (which I am super excited about now, btw). I really love your Hiroto, as well, so I look forward to seeing him more in future chapters. And I really don't think that you have wrote Shou as too girly. <3
Good luck with all school related things, by the way!! I know how they are almost as important as writing fanfiction :)
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But I'm glad you liked it! Hopefully I can write more after I turn in my UC app. =w=;;b I know exactly what I'm going to do--with Nao, anyway...
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YOU'RE AMAZING, YOU KNOW THAT? *A*;
awesome things: THE KIDDIE <3, Yossy/Nao, seven cats, Tora being all commanding and slgkhsdk and and, um, Yuusei and Yusa are such brats;; *_*;;
laghls you better not write anymore until you've finished your app, though ;w;
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lol I won't though, I promise.;; COLLEGE IS IMPORTANT.
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Or I could just like... warm up with some random ickle!Yuusei fic~ or maybe when he first meets Yusa, or SOMETHING.
GOOD-O. DON'T MAKE ME WALALALALALA AT YOU. D8
god I love that icon
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anyways you got a new fan. I likes it... and shou is not to girly.
take care
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The tension is building! Saga is a character that we still haven't seen in 'action' and it creates expectative. I hope to be blown away, honestly, because so far your character development has been elite... By the way, at this pace YoshinorixNao might become my new OTP. Thankyou.
(Did I mention that I looked Yoshinori up because of this story and currently I'm a fan? No? Well, true fact.)
I won't say anymore, just good luck with everything school-related! I'm currently lifeless because I finish in a week and I have exams until the very last day T^T but fortunately I won't have to get back to it never again. (Ah, Graduation ♥)
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Oh! Really, you're a fan of Yoshinori's now? That's awesome, he needs more love. And I'm glad you like Yoshinori/Nao, because that pairing is seriously vital to my life at this point, haha. XD Thanks!
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