「ENCANTAMIENTO INÚTIL」7; Dependence

Nov 29, 2008 11:28

Title: Encantamiento Inútil
Author: 148km
Fandom: alice nine. (also features Sugimoto Yoshinori and THE KIDDIE)
Pairing: Tora/Shou, one-sided Tora/Hiroto, Yoshinori/Nao
Rating: R
Genre: AU
Warnings: Vampires, RPS, male/male, violence, language, failure to secure a beta reader
Chapter: 7 [ archive ]
Summary: For once, Shou was glad that Tora was such a ( Read more... )

useless enchantment, fanfiction, alice nine., the kiddie, rps, sugimoto yoshinori

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chemical_alice November 29 2008, 21:10:47 UTC
YEEEEEESSSSSS!!!!!! *dies of happiness* Right. So you made my day! (and it has been a bad one so far, lol, so thanks so much!!!)

First off I have to say I LOVE the way you added in THE KIDDIE. I especially love how they were referred to as 'the kiddies.' That was so perfect! I know this is a Tora/Shou fic, but this chapter really made me long for some KIDDIE fic lol.

But ANYWAYS! Wonderful, brilliant, excellent chapter. I think it really felt balanced with all the relationship development between Nao and Yoshinori and the playfulness between Tora and Shou and the cats versus the intense foreshadowing of Saga's call and the promise of more action to come with the confrontation. (which I am super excited about now, btw). I really love your Hiroto, as well, so I look forward to seeing him more in future chapters. And I really don't think that you have wrote Shou as too girly. <3

Good luck with all school related things, by the way!! I know how they are almost as important as writing fanfiction :)

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148km November 29 2008, 22:14:00 UTC
I'm glad I could brighten your day then. :'D Hrrrn, I was wondering if people would get the joke, though, ha. XD Yeah, I've secretly been writing KIDDIE fic instead of this, but am all weirded out by it, haha. Yuusei/Yusa is my vice. ♥;;

But I'm glad you liked it! Hopefully I can write more after I turn in my UC app. =w=;;b I know exactly what I'm going to do--with Nao, anyway...

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dai_sugoi November 29 2008, 21:33:16 UTC
hrngh ♥

YOU'RE AMAZING, YOU KNOW THAT? *A*;

awesome things: THE KIDDIE <3, Yossy/Nao, seven cats, Tora being all commanding and slgkhsdk and and, um, Yuusei and Yusa are such brats;; *_*;;

laghls you better not write anymore until you've finished your app, though ;w;

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148km November 29 2008, 22:18:19 UTC
♥;; ALMOST MAKES YOU WANT TO WRITE ME SOME YUUSEI DOESN'T IT. DOESN'T IT. 8D

lol I won't though, I promise.;; COLLEGE IS IMPORTANT.

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dai_sugoi November 29 2008, 22:52:36 UTC
...;A; YES, YES IT DOES, DAMMIT;; I'm so not looking forward to the MASSIVE AMOUNT OF EDITING I need to do to make my NaNo readable, though... because right now, I'm almost afraid to even open it... but I did promise to finish it, so!

Or I could just like... warm up with some random ickle!Yuusei fic~ or maybe when he first meets Yusa, or SOMETHING.

GOOD-O. DON'T MAKE ME WALALALALALA AT YOU. D8

god I love that icon

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torawhore1990 November 29 2008, 22:44:41 UTC
I am new to your fic but I read them all just now. I likes them. and thanks for the info on Ya-BAY-Yo! I didn't know that.

anyways you got a new fan. I likes it... and shou is not to girly.
take care

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148km December 1 2008, 03:25:30 UTC
Thanks for the input, glad you like it!

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disappear4you November 29 2008, 23:07:53 UTC
I like this very much. I read it all in couple of hours *smoke breaks* and I can't wait to read more! It's really caught my interest!

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athenstorm November 30 2008, 01:46:59 UTC
YAY. Oh I can't even begin to explain how much I LOVE this fic. I thought I wouldn't remember what had happened before but everything just fell in place neatly.
The tension is building! Saga is a character that we still haven't seen in 'action' and it creates expectative. I hope to be blown away, honestly, because so far your character development has been elite... By the way, at this pace YoshinorixNao might become my new OTP. Thankyou.
(Did I mention that I looked Yoshinori up because of this story and currently I'm a fan? No? Well, true fact.)

I won't say anymore, just good luck with everything school-related! I'm currently lifeless because I finish in a week and I have exams until the very last day T^T but fortunately I won't have to get back to it never again. (Ah, Graduation ♥)

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148km December 1 2008, 03:39:11 UTC
Honestly, when it's been so long since I last wrote anything, I had to refresh myself, so I'm glad everything made sense to you! I hope my Saga doesn't disappoint; I haven't gotten him entirely figured out yet, you see. X)

Oh! Really, you're a fan of Yoshinori's now? That's awesome, he needs more love. And I'm glad you like Yoshinori/Nao, because that pairing is seriously vital to my life at this point, haha. XD Thanks!

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