An update and what an update. Your descriptions are so vivid and I like your turns of phrase, especially this:
Knows he’s going to hold her accountable for this, to make her explain it to him with her body, to show him why she came. Why she changed her mind.
That he would hold her accountable because that feels like part of their partnership, that they hold each other accountable, part of the agreement that keeps their partnership going. And then ending it with the night sky and then a mention of the city.
Yay! Glad you liked it. I think that he would really hold her accountable. And, that's what I was going for. A slight role reversal in terms of how he tiptoes around her a lot of the time.
Because, really, I think he knows more about her than he would admit or show unless he really had to. He totally gets what's going on in her head, which is why he wants to mess with her sometimes.
I mean, she's just had a panic attack, she's gone up to her partner's house to do some self-sabotaging bullshit that she knows she'll regret and when she gets there, she ends up getting quite a shock. He's the one in control and he really doesn't let her get away with it.
(Because, um, you know, he's crazy about her.) :-)
"TBC"...the most beautiful letters in the world!citosolSeptember 2 2008, 19:14:32 UTC
My favourite Charlie is "in control" Charlie^__^. It's hard for me to think about Dani being in control. Or, better, I love to think that she thinks she is the one in control(never used the words "control" and "think" that much!^___^')when, as the matter of fact, Charlie is the real "master".
(If you hadn't guess it already: wonderful chapter, I LOOOOOOOOOOOVED it!!*___*)
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Knows he’s going to hold her accountable for this, to make her explain it to him with her body, to show him why she came. Why she changed her mind.
That he would hold her accountable because that feels like part of their partnership, that they hold each other accountable, part of the agreement that keeps their partnership going. And then ending it with the night sky and then a mention of the city.
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Because, really, I think he knows more about her than he would admit or show unless he really had to. He totally gets what's going on in her head, which is why he wants to mess with her sometimes.
I mean, she's just had a panic attack, she's gone up to her partner's house to do some self-sabotaging bullshit that she knows she'll regret and when she gets there, she ends up getting quite a shock. He's the one in control and he really doesn't let her get away with it.
(Because, um, you know, he's crazy about her.) :-)
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Favorite line. For real.
Ooooh! I am so jealous of your skills.
AND you managed to wipe away angry thoughts of eric. ;)
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Yes! My work here is done....
Glad you like it!
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It's hard for me to think about Dani being in control. Or, better, I love to think that she thinks she is the one in control(never used the words "control" and "think" that much!^___^')when, as the matter of fact, Charlie is the real "master".
(If you hadn't guess it already: wonderful chapter, I LOOOOOOOOOOOVED it!!*___*)
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But, partnership is all about give and take, no?
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Oh, yes, and you're soooo wise...
^_^
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