Comments | 1_900_mimicry: Spare a moment (Jason/Bruce, PG-13, DCU)

1_900_mimicry

Spare a moment (Jason/Bruce, PG-13, DCU)

Jun 05, 2007 11:06

Title: Spare a moment
Author: Mimic
Characters/Pairings: Jason/Bruce
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't play for keeps, DC owns them.
Notes: I was in a writing mood this morning, and got a spare second to post this. #33 - Right for my fanfic50 table.
Feedback: Love it.
Word Count: 122

( Like he wanted it. )

bruce, slash, fic, jason

Comments 10

greeneyelove June 5 2007, 18:43:07 UTC

Wow. That's a lot of image in a few words.

Well done!

1_900_mimicry June 6 2007, 02:31:05 UTC

Thank you. One sentence just came to me, and I had to keep going.

rubynye June 5 2007, 19:25:07 UTC

Jason owns Bruce. And he so knows it.

1_900_mimicry June 6 2007, 02:32:05 UTC

Mmmm, icon. <3

And yes, he certainly does.

in_excelsis_dea June 5 2007, 19:35:27 UTC

Great imagery. I could really see the scene. And I liked the allusion to struggling at the end.

1_900_mimicry June 6 2007, 02:32:41 UTC

Thank you.

darkdanc3r June 5 2007, 23:38:12 UTC

Ooooooh.... sorry, that's all I can come up with, my brain goo-ed

1_900_mimicry June 6 2007, 02:33:43 UTC

That sounds messy. *grin*

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1_900_mimicry June 6 2007, 02:37:07 UTC

It took me a few edits to remember the right flow to writing drabbles, but I can remember why I like it so much.

Jay is being Robin, which is literally the only answer I can come up with towards why I wrote him that way.

Thanks.