Erik/Charles, Detective/FBI!AU
anonymous
June 11 2011, 01:16:42 UTC
I got this idea in my head and now I cannot unsee it: Erik as a brooding, obsessive detective who's teetering on vigilantism in order to catch and kill a charismatic and elusive serial killer, Sebastian Shaw, who murdered his mother in front of his eyes. Moira is the lead agent of the FBI unit assigned to Shaw's case, and she ends up recruiting Dr. Charles Xavier, a reknowned specialist (clinical/criminal psychologist? a profiler? what?), who also happens to be a brother of the unit's newest recruit, Raven.
In the course of the investigation, Erik and the team cross path, and Erik and Charles get on like a house on fire. (And together, they fight crime!) I can totally see it, with Erik wanting to avenge his mother's death once they corner Shaw and Charles appealing to Erik's nature, and so on and so forth, but I would also love to see them solving other mysteries and fighting the good fight.
Bonus points if Hank, Alex, and Sean are the unit's fledging agents, because, aww.
Fill: With Space to Swing 18/?
anonymous
July 22 2011, 07:12:22 UTC
Hey, I just wanted to thank everyone that's commented. You're all wonderful. Also, my wordcounter tells me that this fic has breached 15,000 words. So much for brevity.The redhead scrambled to his feet and whirled to face Erik, hands held out like he was trying to ward off a rabid dog. “You,” he said, blanching
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Fill: With Space to Swing 20/?
anonymous
July 30 2011, 03:36:04 UTC
“You won’t,” Erik said. His unsaid words rose silently between himself and Moira, like a wall they couldn’t speak of but also couldn’t breach: You won’t have to, because I’ll kill him first.“People have said that before,” Moira said. “Erik, your mother
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Re: Fill: With Space to Swing 20/? odiardaJuly 30 2011, 19:54:22 UTC
poor Charles. I can see him just wandering in Erik's office like a lost puppy, with an adourable pout... *sighs dreamily* But then I can't wait to read how you're gonna make him react :D
Seriously in love with this WIP. Keep it up, gold-hearted anon ! <3
Re: Fill: With Space to Swing 20/? disproveJuly 31 2011, 19:25:17 UTC
//“I do not have issues,” Erik said, and then realized how idiotic that statement was.//
Ahahaha. Point to Lehnsherr for self-awareness. So glad you haven't abandoned this author!anon. Looking forward to how things work out between the guys as colleagues and how Erik's plans for revenge go. I'm itching to know how Charles will go from seemingly untested intern to believable love interest.
In the course of the investigation, Erik and the team cross path, and Erik and Charles get on like a house on fire. (And together, they fight crime!) I can totally see it, with Erik wanting to avenge his mother's death once they corner Shaw and Charles appealing to Erik's nature, and so on and so forth, but I would also love to see them solving other mysteries and fighting the good fight.
Bonus points if Hank, Alex, and Sean are the unit's fledging agents, because, aww.
I need this, I need this now. Anyone? /whimper
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And Alex says 'you win'!
(day just made)
(pours love all over you like a rainbow syrup YEAH)
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HELLO THERE
(extremely excited about this fic)
Damn, I'd say more if I had time. I will probably return to this comment and list all the things I continue to love about this fic.
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Seriously in love with this WIP. Keep it up, gold-hearted anon ! <3
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Ahahaha. Point to Lehnsherr for self-awareness. So glad you haven't abandoned this author!anon. Looking forward to how things work out between the guys as colleagues and how Erik's plans for revenge go. I'm itching to know how Charles will go from seemingly untested intern to believable love interest.
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