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Charles/Erik, AU, dependance

[anonymous]

An AU where Charles never met Raven as a child, so Erik is the first other mutant he comes across, and Charles is so blown away by not being alone that he is willing to help Erik build a mutant army despite his moral misgivings, just because he couldn't stand to be alone again.

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[anonymous]

I am so envious - my drunk fics are riddled with typos and are completely unreadable. But yours is gorgeous and so perfectly characterized.

OP

[anonymous]

THANK YOU ALCOHOL AND THANK YOU YOU, WONDERFUL NONNY.

Seriously though, Charles' depression and his resignation to it bleeds though every sentence, and the resultant atmosphere is so vivid that I'm left here looking at the screen going 'guh' at how perfect this is.

I can't wait for Erik to make an appearance : )

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[thedustwhispers]

It's hateful, that stark reflection of the inside of his head. God, is that what he feels like all the time? Is that how it would feel if he wasn't so resigned to it, so numbed?

This broke my heart. Beautiful story. :)

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[anonymous]

Sometimes…it’s hard to separate. There’s a difference, of course there is, between his thoughts and the borrowed ones. The problem is that it takes him years to learn to distinguish between the two. And the bitter, dull tang of his own self-loathing is so like the casual flicks of freak and god, he’s such a ponce, such a little bitch, how can he smile like that all the time, he’s got to know we can’t stand him that, well. He’s not quite sure if it’s theirs or his sometimes.

He’s fourteen before he really connects that it’s probably not normal to think in the third person. Was there a point where he started thinking he instead of I? Because it’s all just a rambling thrum of narration, thoughts and memories and little snatches of things that might be memories or his memories of those memories. He can’t be sure what’s him, half the time

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[anonymous]

I love the way you're writing this prompt! I can't wait for Erik and Charles to meet.

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[timelineshuffle]

This is incredibly sad and his pain is just so...tangible. CHARLES.

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[sakurabloms]

OH MY GOD!!! Are they just beating him up in part 3 or...Cause I mean he's talking about not being able to sleep on his back and...I mean that could mean...You know?! And after what Michael did... *_*

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[anonymous]

This is like immersion, like tunnel-vision -- you've gotten inside Charles' head and basically constructed it in the story so that we're *there* with him, hurt and confused and afraid of himself and despairing and exhausted and lonely... My heart, poor Charles' heart; congratulations, author, you appear to have reached total empathy with your character. I'm stunned.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

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[anonymous]

It's not always miserable for Charles, despite everything University is a blessing, especially after the horror show of secondary school and sixth form, because for the first time he realizes there actually are other people like him. Not freaks, no, not people who overflow into the heads of those around them, but people who really, genuinely enjoy learning.

It's not something to be shoved and spit at over anymore. It's not showing off, or being wrong again, somehow. University is more cerebral--sure, there are still the rough-and-tumble rugby players who go out of their way to trip him in the halls, but now it seems juvenile. Childish. Charles isn't the freak quite as much as he was--now he's a quiet, somewhat shy boy trying to make his way though his classes, just like everyone else.

Well. Not like everyone else, necessarily, because he figures out very quickly that university is easy. School always has been, for him, but he refuses to feel like an outsider again just because he enjoys lectures and musty old science journals.

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[nudeonthemoon]

oh, he's breaking my heart!! how is poor erik going to make this better??

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[anonymous]

It's not always miserable for Charles, despite everything University is a blessing, especially after the horror show of secondary school and sixth form, because for the first time he realizes there actually are other people like him. Not freaks, no, not people who overflow into the heads of those around them, but people who really, genuinely enjoy learning.

It's not something to be shoved and spit at over anymore. It's not showing off, or being wrong again, somehow. University is more cerebral--sure, there are still the rough-and-tumble rugby players who go out of their way to trip him in the halls, but now it seems juvenile. Childish. Charles isn't the freak quite as much as he was--now he's a quiet, somewhat shy boy trying to make his way though his classes, just like everyone else.

Well. Not like everyone else, necessarily, because he figures out very quickly that university is easy. School always has been, for him, but he refuses to feel like an outsider again just because he enjoys lectures and musty old science journals.

Anon here.

[anonymous]

ugh sorry about the double post...

Anon here.

[anonymous]

Also, it's been like a day and the rest of these posts aren't showing up, so I can't post more? Why is that? I am baffled and angered by LJ.

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[anonymous]

The smiling girl is the one who finds him, in the end. They're at a party, one of those accidental dormitory affairs that everyone just kind of winds up at, without knowing quite how they've gotten there. Charles has downed five pints and a few spectacularly awful mixed drinks by this point, and he's melted into the couch, slumped over and half-asleep and almost happy.

She sits down next to him, too close, her thigh bare and warm against the wool of his trousers. She's pretty, he thinks muzzily, in such a California way--none of that anaemic English pallor, just gold skin and white teeth and hair the colour of corn silk.

He realizes, abruptly, that it's the texture of corn silk, too. Which he knows, because he's touching it.

'Sorry, so sorry,' he murmurs, snatching his hand back. He's not that drunk, he's never that drunk. What the hell is he doing? Smiling doesn't mean she's okay with touching him, doesn't mean she wants him touching her and what if she thinks he's trying to pick her up, Christ, he can't exactly come out with

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[nausicaa83]

Wow, I can't wait to read more. So intriguing! *_____*