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Sep 14, 2005 23:27

Title: Belong Here
Rating: G
Pairing: Mal/Inara
Spoilers: None.
Word Count: 1100+
Feedback: Yes, please!
Summary: We all have bad habits, don't we?
AN: alizarin_nyc just didn't know what she was letting loose, when she asked for Mal/Inara.

Belong Here )

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fiona_fawkes September 20 2005, 01:54:40 UTC
Oh that was a very nice insight into their relationship. Thanks ever so much for sharing. You've made a very captivating short even though 'technically' nothing really happens. But then again, maybe that's the point. I liked very much. And I secong the motion that you should look into writing something longer.

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poisontaster September 22 2005, 20:56:33 UTC
This is extremely belated, but thank you!

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tartsweetheart September 20 2005, 04:30:09 UTC
I don't know how to verbalize this exactly, but let me try.

Good Mal/Inara makes my body tense and my stomach fill with butterflies. Their relationship is so intriguing, beautiful, and impossible. I just love it.

This piece feels so incredibly authentic. Marvelous work.

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poisontaster September 22 2005, 20:57:44 UTC
Thank you! I love the dynamic between Mal & Inara, but I hadn't tried to write anything shippy before. This feels like it had been bubbling on the backburner for a while.

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tartsweetheart September 23 2005, 04:53:42 UTC
You're welcome.

Fantastic job on your first try then. Brava, honey.

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katinka31 September 22 2005, 20:48:13 UTC
*lets out breath*

Oh, that is just lovely. You've captured them perfectly. :)

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poisontaster September 22 2005, 20:58:10 UTC
8D Thank you!

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anr April 12 2006, 15:55:18 UTC
This was lovely. I really liked your characterisation of Inara. Beautiful.

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poisontaster April 12 2006, 16:07:09 UTC
Thank you!

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