Eyes On The Moon - Chapter 6

May 07, 2014 08:29

Title: Eyes on the Moon
Pairings: Luhan/Baekhyun, Kris/Suho, Kris/Yixing; side, Xiumin/Tao, Kai/Sehun
Genre: werewolf, omegaverse
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter)
Summary: Suho is the new Alpha of a depleted and damaged pack.

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Chapter 6 Suho had calmed down considerably by the time he had gotten back to the pack house. He knew there was no ( Read more... )

group: exo, pairing: baekhyun/luhan, story: eyes on the moon

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kfangirl4 May 7 2014, 13:13:02 UTC
Calm yourself, please, authornim!

The post, while a little short, had good story progression and character development. We all go through hardship that keeps us from writing, whether it be school, work, family, illness, or writer's block. It happens and if you obsess over it, you never get past it.

I think the ferry accident affected us all, either consciously or subconsciously, and reminded us that time and life are precious.

Rest well, eat well, relax your mind. Meditation works for me.

If you need a beta or need to bounce ideas off of someone, I can be your faithful servant.

*90 degree bow in your general direction*

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21walker May 8 2014, 00:27:15 UTC
Thank you. Your comment made me feel better even if I do feel like this chapter could've been so so much more. Part of the reason I just decided to post it was because I wanted to get over it. If I'd kept it any longer I'd have been stuck even longer in my rut.

The ferry accident is so awful, I don't even like to think about it... all those teenagers...

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21walker May 8 2014, 00:28:24 UTC
Also if I ever get stuck again, I might just take you up on your offer ;)

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kfangirl4 May 8 2014, 09:45:00 UTC
:-)

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tinystargazer May 7 2014, 14:07:00 UTC
No author-nim, you are not a failure! I totes understand your writer's block 'cause I myself have a fic that I need to update but havent yet... this chapter is great and i love that it's slowly building up to the main event (ehem lubaek goodyness ehem)

Im even really thankful that you're updating even through hard times //gives you bear hug// fighting author-nim!!

And since kfangirl4 mentioned it, gosh i would also love to offer help! Just say the word, and voila! XD ♥

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21walker May 8 2014, 00:30:13 UTC
I was being really melodramatic when I posted this. It's just been stuck in a rut for so long!

*hugs back* Thank you for the support and I hope you manage to get through your writers block as well *hwaiting*

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amyhay_san May 7 2014, 15:20:55 UTC
i really love your storys
poor beakhyun he is going through so much in such a short amount of time.
sorry i haven't commented for a while
i don't under stand why you a not happy with this chapter its awsome
hope life allows you to update soon

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21walker May 8 2014, 00:35:33 UTC
Thank you <3
People are their own worst critics. They always want to do better. I definitely felt this chapter could've been better, but I thought I'd probably never update if I thought like that.
It's okay hun, I have nothing against silent readers. Sometimes I don't comment either, even though I like the story or am friends with the writer.
Well, I suddenly have a lot of free time so I might be updating a lot more regularly ^^

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amyhay_san May 8 2014, 04:43:24 UTC
i hope that free time is due to good reasons and not bad
i am lookinh forword to you up dating

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charliebnim May 7 2014, 20:07:40 UTC
dude, BREATH! you are wonderful and everything will be great just keep going and if you need to talk i'm here !! <3 don't be sad i love you

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21walker May 8 2014, 00:36:47 UTC
Thanks sweetie. You are so nice >< Love you too <3

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littlexotic September 26 2016, 00:42:09 UTC
Where Is The rest of the FIC? Omg

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