Comments | 24_7_posting: A poem i wrote the other day when i was bored : / not sure if its any good, its my first one .

dreamer134 in 24_7_posting

Jun 01, 2009 19:54

( My poem :) )

Comments 6

acidisdangerous June 1 2009, 18:57:00 UTC

wow
i really like this
=]

chels_e_a June 1 2009, 18:58:26 UTC

thats very good.
one of the best ive read
:]

dreamer134 June 1 2009, 18:59:26 UTC

:O wow.

thankyou. I didnt think id recieve comments like these :S

lovelyalyssa June 1 2009, 19:13:06 UTC

thats sad. scary even.
be happy :)

4eva_thin June 2 2009, 05:29:37 UTC

Wow! That is a magnificent poem! It is very sad :(
You have incredible writing skills, that poem is just amazing, absolutely amazing.
xoxo

skinny_bones528 December 20 2009, 21:35:29 UTC

That's so powerful, and so true. You are great at writing, please keep it up!