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Nobody's Listening

Sep 30, 2008 16:56

Title: Nobody's listening

Author: 3rd_Leg

Pairing: J2

Disclaimer: When you wish upon a star, make sure its actually a star, not some airplane flying overhead.

Rating: PG-14 (Language primarily)

Word Count: ~3000

Summary: Part 5 of the Deaf!Jared verse. This is based on the prompt by kuhekabir that plainly put entailed Jared getting hurt by Jensen, and ( Read more... )

deaf!jared

Comments 37

albeitslowly September 30 2008, 22:09:16 UTC

Hey! You told me you were gonna tell me when you posted. LOL.

I already said I think this is some of your best stuff, even if I don't care much for the premise of them hurting each other. A girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do, right?

But you really nailed the Jared POV, and the basketball game was really well done. Got sucked right in, and you know I"m not a bball fan.

3rd_leg September 30 2008, 22:14:16 UTC

lol I totally just sent you an email saying I posted! right before I got your reply. Thats creepy--same brain waves I tell ya.

And yep, tis was the prompt! So yep yep. I'm glad you liked the basketball game, I had to like reign myself back, that was my life for almost 8 years so I was like wait, does everyone know what the paint is???? lol

Thanks for your continuous support of my nuttiness! Glad you liked it.

billysgirl5 September 30 2008, 23:07:08 UTC

You never fail to make me cry with this verse. I can't tell you enough how much I love these stories. They're so heartbreaking, but beautiful at the same time. Wonderfully written, too. Great job!

3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:24:18 UTC

Awww *hands tissue* I seriously don't set out trying to make people cry! I'm glad you like this verse and thank you so much for reading it and letting me know your thoughts!

Ahhhhh... loustat September 30 2008, 23:27:40 UTC

I loved this story! Jared and Jensen are just so cute and I'm glad Jared understands that like him, Jensen isn't perfect but they will overcome together. Makes me all warm and fuzzy inside...whoa...did I just say that? *Clears Throat* Great, I'm officially a sap!;D

Re: Ahhhhh... 3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:23:18 UTC

lol you did just say that! And its okay we're entitled to at least a few sappy moments in our lifetime, i think!

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

kissedteardrops September 30 2008, 23:48:38 UTC

So, I just read all five parts. And this is seriously amazing. I haven't read anything in a long time that made me cry, and this did.

3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:26:07 UTC

*hands tissue* And that's quite a feat in one sitting! lol I can get long winded at times. I'm glad you enjoyed the read and thank you so much for commenting.

I so feel bad I make people cry....

9thof9 October 1 2008, 00:40:55 UTC

You weren't kidding when you said Jensen was gonna hurt Jared. As far as I'm concerned, that's the cruelest Jensen's been throughout this entire 'verse.

The game was so intense I didn't even notice a lack of dialog. It reminded me of car chases in movies. They're zigging, zagging and shooting while hanging out the window so much you don't miss them talking.

3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:27:47 UTC

Yeah, it is, but I wanted to put it in like its mostly Jensen being absentminded and inadvertly doing the hurt. I've played in a lot of games and sometimes you just get so competitive you forget about the outerlaying things....

lol, and good the action wasnt too much. I always worry about that.

Thanks for reading! lurvs ya.