[one shot] 30 Days of Monologue

[4d_artbitch]

Author 4d_artbitch
Rating: PG-ish
Genre: angst, fluff.
Pairing: onkey, 2min.
Disclaimer: i just owned C on my physics exam.
Summary: in which Jinki is an orphan, Taemin is his stubborn brother, Key loves to nag and Minho just doesn't like strawberry.

Comments

[mazokuwithwings]

i saw the comment above
wow o.O you're indonesian? inspired by novel? jd pgn beli. baru terbit di toko buku ya?
oh i feel so weird after typing indonesian in this site...
cool idea! two thumbs up!
sticky notes on a refrigerator
i want a happy ending ofc >.<
but if you could post both, i agree to it too.
i'm just curious. teehee~ oh jinki pls wake up! little minnie and kibummie are sad~
update soon! great story!

[4d_artbitch]

yep, i'm indonesian kakak! damn, i barely met indonesian at LJ, so freakin happy to know youuu>___<

tehehe. thanks for reading!. endingnya sudah saya update, bukunya udah lama kak, terbitan Gramed tahun 2008 kalo gasalah :D

//IKR. it feels so weird chat with bahasa at LJ xDDD

[retna46]

Happy ending pleaseee... T _ T

-still crying waiting jinki to wake up-

[4d_artbitch]

yup, i've updated the happy ending~~
hope you like it! <3
and thanks for reading :)

[kim_jaejoong]

notes on the fridge is a new plot device for me. this is quite refreshing ;D

[4d_artbitch]

thank you so much for reading! ;D
OHMYGOOOOSSH YOUR USERPIC IS FREAKIN CUTE. BBZZZ.

[4d_artbitch]

OMO DON'T CRY! *gives you Taemin*
i've made the ending... hope you like it!

yep i'm Indonesian! and you are? ;D

[ezri_sun]

I really enjoyed it. My family for a while communicated using notes on the kitchen door for a good month once (the fridge was full of other notes). I like even though Onew can't read the notes Taemin still writes to him, its cute.

My one complaint is that, I'm assuming this is taking place in Seoul or Korea in general as you haven't defined another location. Given that it July/August are summer months in the northern hemisphere it wouldn't be snowing. Rain, totally. Actually there has been a lot of flooding recently too. Thats my only annoyance, I like continuity...

Other than that, I'm hoping for a happy ending! (Although I am curious to see what the sad ending is....)

[4d_artbitch]

OH thanks for noticing my mistake! I wasn't paying enough attention to the weather ;A; a.k.a. this lazy girl who live at d country with 2 seasons was too lazy to do some research first *slaps self*
thank you so much~ ^^

okies, happy ending for you C: .hope you like it~

The sad one is... You know what. Involves tears, dying, grave, tears, tears... But still there'll be a smile in the end. My sad ending is not completely sad, tbh.