five different languages part 2

[52016y]

”You really shouldn’t have kissed Jaejoong yesterday.”

”I know, but-but I was drunk and I, I didn’t think straight, you know how I am when I’m drunk, right?”

A scoff.

”I know, but you still shouldn’t have. Jaejoong’s starting his ‘hey-let’s-get-over-Yunho!’ -process and I don’t want others to make it more painful for him than it already is.”

A

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[vrilly]

OMG YES

[52016y]

WHY ARE YOU GUYS SO FAST---------

[vrilly]

;____________; Awww.... Yunho does have something for Jaejoong but he doesn't fully realize/ comprehend it yet? I need moar of this fic! ♥

I really liked the Jaesuchun friendship in here too :D.

[52016y]

Ah well Yunho is kind of thick-headed like that. And of course, his gf just left him for his own mistakes (the idiot couldn't live with the guilt %D) /so/ he doesn't... yeah. So he... >XD I don't want to spoil for the possible third fic !

Ah asfiasg Jaesuchun is amazing ♥

♥ Uww thanks for commenting and reading AND recommending this fic... XDD I was very surprised when I heard that this fic had been recced---!

[lilxinyue]

Hehe. Spot :D brb. me gonna go read part one xD!. need to refresh memory i think -.-*

[52016y]

8DDDDDd you do that o/

[lilxinyue]

Oh dear sweety. You've tugged a string on my heart. x.x This is very well written, i want more!!!!. xD. hehe but aiish. Yunnie and Joongie x.x for some reason i feel like this is something that's happening out there in reality. God i love you xD. i'm entranced :D.

[52016y]

♥ aww thanks for the compliments! 8D

Ah I'm glad that you feel like that -- I mean, I'm glad that you feel like it's happening in reality~ and I love you too XD !

Thanks for commenting and reading, I really appreciate it!

[chloe1910]

Spot. brb for comment!! Run off to read Part 1.

[chloe1910]

Ah...And so Yunho broke off with his girlfriend...

Sigh Yunho ah...even though you are beginning to realise that Jaejoong is truly someone important to you, you never really understand fully your feelings for Jaejoong huh?

Perhaps Yunho needs more reminder from Changmin...hehe....Changmin should be openly more affection towards Jae to evoke the green monster in Yunho huh?

I hope the ending is not the final ending. This sure sounds like there's more coming? I hope so *pleading puppy eyes* But if this truly ends here..I'm rather happy with the open ended ending too..caus eit leaves us with a lot of space for imagination and promises...(well, I'm really going all optimistic on this)...

I'm still wondering what's up with Yoochun and Junsu or Junsu with Changmin....hm...

[52016y]

I'm really thinking about writing a third fic--- if people want one. (and even if they don't, I might write one :D)

I love your optimistic way on this! 8D As I said before, if I have time (school starts the day after tomorrow and I'm going to be igdsjiodf busy) I might start writing the third fic and if I /do/ start writing the third fic, it's not going to come out as fast as this one came.

Changmin really didn't appear that much in this part :( Poor Minnie! I love to write him but... I just couldn't find enough places for him to appear to.

And about Yoochun and Junsu -- there might be a side-story for them. Might. Again, I'm going to use 'time' as my excuse.

Thanks for reading and commenting -- again! Your long comments are always fun to read and answer to ♥

[chloe1910]

Ah..it's really sweet of you to consider writing a third fic...I hope you do but seriously, do it at your own pace and time, no hurry about it.

Yes, I'm going optimistic cause it's Yunjae we are talking about....XD

Yes, I love Minnie too and I think he deserved more fic time, hahaha..I would love to read a side story on our Yoosu....

It's really my pleasure reading and commenting....&hearts:

[_happy_as_rain_]

YOU UPDATED SO FAST!!!!!!! ;_______________;

OMFG I love this second piece. SO MUCH. I love love love you take things slow, make things subtly change - there's no big bangs and flashes of hugely passionate love or magic. This feels real. How human love is a gradual realization. You really really improved a lot for this second piece, I feel in characterization. Yunho in the first piece was pretty much a big jackass and he didn't really flesh out his character but... with this piece centering on him and his slow change and growth as a person - it really developed the piece a lot. Even Jaejoong, who never needed this long journey like Yunho to realize how much he loves the other man, grows and matures, too. I LOVE THIS FIC. I really hope you write that sequel of a sequel. ♥

(Also, I wanted to mention you have a voice change here from the other piece? But I really like it. It's very lyrical. :D)

[52016y]

Ah~ I know! :D The first piece was more like -- more like "the beginning" and introducing Changmin + Jaejoong's problems. At least I feel that way; and this one focuses more on Yunho (and Jaejoong, but, oh well!) and making his character more.. believable and less of a jackass. (I hated how the first fic 'accidentally' made Yunho look like a vvvvvery selfish bastard)

And about the slow and subtle change: that was my intention-- I wanted it to seem realistic in that way, because suddenly realizing your everlasting love for your best friend is just... very unreal XD

(I noticed it too--- I guess the style depends on how I'm feeling at the moment, I think...)

[joongielover]

OMFG YOU'RE SO FAST. *SAVES SPOT*

... *goes back to part one*

ILOVEYOU <3.

[joongielover]

Ah. Finally they broke up O_O. LOL. His girlfriend is sweet, good, but too much of a perfectionist; does she realize she can't make coffee? XDDD.

Yes. I want a third piece. Please. I love you ♥~
This one was interesting. More focused on Yunho's side, I think. And still with Jaejoong's but then looking into how Yunho feels. He's so... okay, he is passive. Friends for 10 years and didn't noticed Joongie's love for him. Gahh. Yes, I want another sequel XDDD~
The Jaesu. LOL!!! Junsu's adorable. And Yoochun totally turned gay, he loves Susu ^^! Hints of it? XDDD.
Changmin's always the helpful, intelligent observer :D:D. Love the way you wrote Changmin. HAHAHA; witty and still adorable, hehe.

iloveyou and this fic <3~

[52016y]

I guess she /doesn't/ realize her awful coffee-making skills! XDDD

Ah I'll try to think about how to write the third fic (I hate writing without having no idea what to write XD) umm.. tomorrow? I love you too for reading and commenting ! ♥
Yeah, it indeed was more focused on Yunho (since the first fic made him look like a bastard). He really is passive XDD Annoyingly so!

Junsu is so fun to write with Yoochun~ XD They're... an interesting pair. Hints of it, maybe, but he------- I WON'T BE SPOILING !

uww again, I love you too ! ♥