A Lesson in Romantics (Part 2/2)

Mar 29, 2010 10:40



Title: A Lesson in Romantics (Part 2/2)

Pairing: Demi/Selena

Rating: M for adult themes

Disclaimer: I own nothing and am receiving no profit; no one owns Demi Lovato or Selena Gomez.

Summary: Selena has a problem, Demi wants to help

Authors Note: Sorry about the massive waiting period between parts but, better late than never yeah? Big thank you to ( Read more... )

demi/selena, rpfs, femslash

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OMG! jilly_baby92 March 29 2010, 22:53:10 UTC
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! lol selena's awkwardness is hsterical and demi is so funny. u shud deifnitely make anotther chapter or 2...or a million lol.

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Re: OMG! 5x5barista March 30 2010, 05:36:22 UTC
haha thanks, I don't know about another chapter. I have some ideas but knowing how I am about updating it will take FOREVER.

But, you know I'll still keep up with writing Demi/Selena stories!

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rabble_round March 29 2010, 23:13:19 UTC
That was campy, hilarious and all together wonderful.

“We really don’t need ‘Activist-Selena’ right now.”

I found that line particularly hilarious. I can totally see Selena getting distracted by global injustice during sexytimes.

And Demi getting frustrated with Selena not being able to find her clit was fucking great as was her directly quote a wikipedia article. LMFAO

This was amazingly entertaining.

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rabble_round March 29 2010, 23:14:11 UTC
*directly quoting

yay for bad grammar.

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 05:39:38 UTC
Thanks! I've never been described as campy before, hahaha awesome! Yeah that line is SO 'Selena' I loved it.

I had to put Wiki in there, since I totally referenced it when I was writing.

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bridgeisburning March 29 2010, 23:24:02 UTC
Aww I really like the way you wrapped it up - very fairy-tale ending. And love that you played up the looser innuendo hahaha

p.s. I really did nothing here, no need to credit!

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 05:43:24 UTC
Yeah, in my opinion this fandom NEEDS a fairy tale ending right about now. Badly! Jemi... grrr...

The innuendo was totally your fault! I didn't even notice it before, so you have some major credit to that joke. And you totally saved Demi's pants-situation among many other errors :)

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twztedsymphony March 29 2010, 23:37:24 UTC
Yaay! I'm so glad you posted another chapter. Part 1 had me cracking up, this chapter was no different. Awesome! :D

Please don't stop writing. This is EPICNESS! So funny, yet adorable & awkward. =) <3

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 05:46:16 UTC
Epicness!!! Hahaha I just know I'll be bragging about this to my brother for at least two days, thanks SO much for reading.

Adorable & awkward is my favorite flavor lol

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x_donttrust March 30 2010, 01:08:01 UTC
That was HOT! And funny, AUHSHUAHUS it's funny how you portrayed the naive Selena in there.

“Yes, you do!” Demi argued.

“I beg to differ! There is substantial evidence that would conclude the opposite!”

I totally cracked up at this, you have no idea! My mom was like 'WTF' in the living room, 'cause I was laughing sooo hard! Really good!

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 05:50:38 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't too sure about that line since it was so wordy but I went with it and it's awesome that it worked out :)

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