A Lesson in Romantics (Part 2/2)

Mar 29, 2010 10:40



Title: A Lesson in Romantics (Part 2/2)

Pairing: Demi/Selena

Rating: M for adult themes

Disclaimer: I own nothing and am receiving no profit; no one owns Demi Lovato or Selena Gomez.

Summary: Selena has a problem, Demi wants to help

Authors Note: Sorry about the massive waiting period between parts but, better late than never yeah? Big thank you to ( Read more... )

demi/selena, rpfs, femslash

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sebrone March 30 2010, 01:12:25 UTC
I DON'T EVEN HAVE WORDS FOR HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS. Every single line was great and I honestly could not pick a favorite one. AND THE ENDING MADE ME QUITE HAPPY. :D Loved this, so very much.

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 05:56:26 UTC
Awww thanks, I try ;)
This comment made me smile, I just really like Caps Lock

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switchfoot13 March 30 2010, 01:46:43 UTC
gawd i can't even believe i read that with my dad in the same room. i'm such a computer ninja. but i HAD TO.

:O

i also literally LOLed like 6 times :P

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 05:58:18 UTC
lmao 'computer ninja' I couldn't imagine reading something like this with a parental unit in the vicinity, you crazy kid! hahahaha

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xxalynaj March 30 2010, 02:38:44 UTC
THIS WAS SO AMAZINGGG. :]] I can't begin to explain how much I love the way you write the banter between them. :) I was laughing so hard through most of this, but the same time, it's a fairytale ending and is completely hot throughout. :]

Great job!

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 06:01:26 UTC
The banter is awesome because of the voices in my head, all great writers are partail lunatics with god-complexes... lol totally kidding! Hahaha i read that somewhere, anyway thanks for reading.

Fairy-tale-ending WIN!

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thefantasmickah March 30 2010, 03:37:51 UTC
Oh my, this is fantastic. I just loved the part when Demi was just so frustrated with Selena that she had to show her. Oh man. So good.

And this is how you cool link something:

<.a href="http://5x5barista.livejournal.com/5060.html".>This is a super amazing link.<./.a>

You just get rid of the periods where they don't make sense.

So then it will be:

This is a super amazing link.

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 06:04:57 UTC
Awesome! I've been tutored :) hahaha
And you know it had to happen sooner or later. Demi's patience is only so-so especially with naked Selena in the room :)

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kittyspotneko March 30 2010, 03:50:42 UTC
That was so epic, I felt I must tweet about it. So I did, on both accounts. I'm afraid I might be dead now from all the laughter. You should write a comedy script. Srsly

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5x5barista March 30 2010, 06:08:03 UTC
Thanks! Script writing? Hahaha awesome
And: omg! you tweeted about it!? that's so awesome hahaha what did you say?

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