Not-So-Divine Intervention ~ Part 3

Oct 05, 2010 15:01

The following chapter is brought to you by the letters 'c', as in chazper, and 's' as in snowprince, without both of whose help, this would have been impossible. All errors remaining are all mine.

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'When you gonna forgive the asshole? He needs to make amends.'

Chickie said nothing at first. Then, in carefully thought out speech, she said, 'It seems to me that with all that’s gone under the bridge, Dewey isn’t the only one who needs to make amends.'
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sarak14 October 5 2010, 20:12:08 UTC
Noooo.....!!! You cannot shoot Ben Sherman!
I hope he doesn't die, or become disabled and not be able to be a cop anymore. [shudder]

Great, great chapter. And this is totally what popped into my head when I read this
Ben thought that a run on the beach might clear his head

And yay for the return of Michelle! :)

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60schic October 5 2010, 21:43:45 UTC
AHAHAHAHA! I think that's the exact image I had in mind. I may need to *expand* upon Ben/Michelle in the last chapter, for my own sanity.

Unless I kill Sherman off................

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sarak14 October 5 2010, 21:48:08 UTC
I may need to *expand* upon Ben/Michelle in the last chapter, for my own sanity.
YES! Can't wait for that!

Unless I kill Sherman off................
[plugs ears with fingers] Lalalalala....I can't hear you.....

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60schic October 5 2010, 21:52:22 UTC
*snickers* Alive?...Dead...Alive?...Dead...

So many decisions, so few Shermans.

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oc_gambit2 October 5 2010, 20:20:10 UTC
*reaction* AAAAAAAHHHH!! Okay, Cooper can drink/drug himself into a stupor all he wants on his own time, but when the effects/ aftereffects spill into work hours ( ... )

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60schic October 5 2010, 21:49:52 UTC
Hi sweetie---I guess you're having an *online moment*.

Hurting the woobie....hmmmm; must give it some thought. (it's funny that I don't consider myself an angst writer as I so much more prefer the smut. And yet - what do I write?)

Speaking of too brief? That scene! Ha - exactly what my beta said! As to that beseeching expression.......think R/T and puppy dog eyes.

That last line you quoted made it into the edit at the last minute (well, the first part of it, anyway)

Thanks Babe. I really need to finish this before canon does it for me. Now, as to a certain R/L story? I'm just awaitin' on ya!

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oc_gambit2 October 6 2010, 02:33:43 UTC
Sheesh, I come back mostly to tease you about being in preschool teacher mode- 'c' for chazper, indeed! *snorts*- and I discover you discussing Shermancide. Evil, evil chic!

Yeah, I have more online moments here at our southern casa, as internet only isn't too pricey. Busy enough lately I haven't used it as much as usual...will drop you an email re: *that*.

*multiple comments brought to you today by the letter 'h'. As in HOT Sherman*

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cheekymice October 5 2010, 20:52:12 UTC
Squeeeeeeeee!

Just found this! How did I miss this Chic!!!

*bounces*

I think I love you!

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60schic October 5 2010, 21:40:44 UTC
HEE!

You already know I love YOU. And hang on every chapter of Rag Doll, so we're about even.

Wait, do you mean you missed this entire story???? Well, I'm glad to have you here now.

*smooches*

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zbyszko October 5 2010, 21:40:34 UTC
Great update but I hope that Ben gets some backup real soon. : )

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60schic October 5 2010, 21:41:28 UTC
Backup? What's that?

*whistles*

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zbyszko October 5 2010, 22:19:09 UTC
The emphasis is more on the "soon" than on "backup" in my comment. : )

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60schic October 6 2010, 00:18:01 UTC
*smiles*

'soon' is such a relative word in my world these days.

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chazper October 5 2010, 22:22:19 UTC
Hmm . . . I was about to comment on how much I enjoyed reading this (again) and how well your slight revisions worked. But then I read your remark about killing Ben and--what??? What?What?What??? I do not approve that plot direction at all. And Cooper will need a lot more than an intervention if Ben dies because of his fuck up. So just rethink that whole idea, Chic. (Of course I assume you were kidding. And you'd better be!)

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60schic October 6 2010, 00:15:43 UTC
Who, me?

have you ever known me to kill the dear boy? and do you think I want to antagonize my dear beta?

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