Comments | 7_chakras: "secrets" (zuko/katara, D, sound)

little_fool in 7_chakras

"secrets" (zuko/katara, D, sound)

Mar 10, 2007 19:04

Title: secrets
Author: little_fool
Claim: zuko/katara
Challenge: duality; truth
Chakra/Themeset: sound
Prompt: ( If there was one thing that Toph could detect was if someone was lying. )

Comments 32

amethyststeam March 11 2007, 04:15:44 UTC

ROFL. xDDDD

Toph, Toph, Toph; I so <3 you. ^^^

little_fool March 11 2007, 16:19:03 UTC

XDD

shewolf777 March 11 2007, 04:23:40 UTC

Utter Brilliance... Toph rules, seriously XD

little_fool March 11 2007, 16:19:37 UTC

Thanks! She does. omg i don't know how she does it.

mathkid March 11 2007, 04:59:15 UTC

AWESOME. ♥ You captured Toph's manner of speaking perfectly.

little_fool March 11 2007, 16:20:33 UTC

Thanks!! I'm glad you think so. I think shes a bit hard to write because of dialogue-- I never really know what she would say.

nuitsansetoiles March 11 2007, 05:01:10 UTC

I read the whole thing with a stupid grin on my face. Great work! Toph is love.

little_fool March 11 2007, 16:21:04 UTC

Haha. Thanks. :DD!

romanitas March 11 2007, 07:11:55 UTC

Ahahahaha. I absolutely love how you've written Toph. ♥
The dialogue was excellent! XD

And I loved Sokka's line,
“I could careless if Your Majesty goes off to bed some girl as long as it’s not my sister.”
Rofl. Because every ZK Shipper wants to see that happen.

Yay! I loved this! Such a fun read! ^_^

little_fool March 11 2007, 16:25:16 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥ So glad you enjoyed it.

Now I want to read Sokka walking in on Zuko and Katara.

romanitas March 14 2007, 06:05:02 UTC

You are most welcomes! ♥

Omg me too. Why hasn't this been written?