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dulanis January 9 2012, 03:47:24 UTC
Ohhhh. So exciting. Half the police is on it. Can't wait to read more... :)

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7daywar January 9 2012, 05:10:12 UTC
yes, they're definitely closing in and getting more involved. ^_^

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takelo14 January 9 2012, 04:37:14 UTC
Wahhhhh hyori did that to rain??? I can't decide whether he deserved the pain or not...
Hey I kinda wish you'd put more yunjae in >.< I mean it's a yunjae fanfic riiight?

Lol anyways, thanks for writing bb <3333 update soon ^^

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7daywar January 9 2012, 05:13:20 UTC
yes she did, she played her part in it, by slipping the drug into rain's drinks. um... yunjae are the main pairing of course, but that's not really the point of this, the point of this story is the drug and them putting a stop to it. i do want to add more yunjae, but with all the tension there's never really an open slot for it. i will do my best though. i want more yunjae in this too, lol.

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chloe1910 January 9 2012, 05:09:16 UTC
I hope Hyori keep to her word and tell Yunho and Yoochun everything. I hope they video cam everything that Hyori said cause I don't think Tablo is going to let her live to stand onthe witness stand.

Oh God, Changmin and Sungjong tried to commit suicide. I hope they are going to be ok T_T Tablo and his gang deserves to rot in hell.

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7daywar January 9 2012, 05:16:34 UTC
hyori is definitely in compliance at this point, but you're right, tablo definitely won't stand for her giving them away. yes, and at this point they're going to be fine, i know who i'm going to kill off next, but those two are one of them. and yes they do!

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crystaldee January 9 2012, 06:07:05 UTC
Tablo is already out of his fucking mind....
Someone needs to blow this man's head...

Waiting for the next part ^___^

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7daywar January 9 2012, 15:18:49 UTC
lol. or something like that deary! ^_^

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chaebol January 9 2012, 06:38:22 UTC
ahhh it's a wonder how rain was able to not punch her for doing that to junki D: well, now that's alot of self control xD

"Fool, we are the police." I love how hyunjoong said it! LOLOL it was so hilarious and used just perfectly at the right time! xD though poor yeseob... ;-;

gaaaaahhhh everyone is cutting their wrist?! waeeee! isn't there another way to kill themselves? ;-; (lolol this is the only thing i'm questioning?! xD) well telling them to stop isn't going to make them stop anyway, ne? :)

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7daywar January 9 2012, 15:34:00 UTC
i was going to have him rough her up in the original draft, but decided against it, since it wouldn't look good for him to beat up on a woman, ne? though yes that is some major self control there!

yeseob may not be dead, and yes, that is a great line. i'm sure it's been said before in some sort of crooked cop drama or movie i can remember hearing it, but can't remember from where?

not every deary, but that is a side effect of the drugs, it depresses you to the point of you wanting to commit suicide, this is the real purpose of the drug and if that didn't work, then just leave it to the childbirth. it's really complicated, but i'll have it all figured out by the last chapter! and no dear, at least not tablo anyway... ^_^

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chaebol January 10 2012, 00:03:37 UTC
omg that's true, rain beating up a woman would be a no-no to the world! o___o!

lol indeed! yeseob must be alive to tell yunjae and everyone else what he saw! xD then you can kill him it sounds familar to me too, like in a thriller movie~ i'm not sure myself! D:

ooooooohhh! i see! i see! makes absolutely perfect sense! ^___^ it's a wonder when it will all end since it's already this far...

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