Comments | 7daywar: Bourne From Hate, .IX, Part I

7daywar

Bourne From Hate, .IX, Part I

Jan 15, 2012 23:06

Comments 21

joy_twinz January 16 2012, 12:30:16 UTC

Can Hyunjoong just spare Yeseob's life? I don't want Yeseob to turn into the bad side. I LOLed at baro's predicament but really looking forward to their undercover assignment. thanks for the update!

7daywar January 16 2012, 19:00:10 UTC

at this point in time there is no reason to worry about yeseobs life, i have decided to let hyunjoong spare him (whew!) lol. i know, it made more sense! you're welcome!

ae_yeon January 16 2012, 17:15:33 UTC

It's really late at night here and my internet connection is bad.
So Im gonna leave a short comment.
Im glad Hyunjoong still has some humanity in him..
Letting Yoseob go and feeling guilty.. hmm.. for Jae?
Other than Baro's undercover part, seems like the story hasnt progressed much..
Update soon! :)

7daywar January 16 2012, 19:01:43 UTC

yes, this leads into hyunjoong's back story. this is only part one, so there's no progression because it's the set up to part two. thank you for reading!

harunotenshi January 17 2012, 00:20:57 UTC

omg... things are escalating now... hyori should just spill the whole thing so that they could get to the bottom of this mess and try and find some sort of antidote or something that will save both the babies and the expecting fathers (esp them since the carrying fathers die because of child birth)

please update again soon!

7daywar January 17 2012, 02:49:10 UTC

yes it is, the first part of the climax comes in part two. if i can figure out how to make it all come together! thank you and i will try to!

sheilapiglet January 17 2012, 01:52:08 UTC

I wonder if HJ did this cuz he knew that Jae wanted to have kids with Yunho?..but then he didn't know that the people that were infected by it would die in the end?...or perhaps he was jealous that YH took Jae from him?...hmm..anyways, just write the story the way you feel is right...thanks for acknowledging my concerns from before...looking forward to your next update=)

7daywar January 17 2012, 02:50:35 UTC

you're on the right track, so don't let go of it. and thank you for that, i felt a lot of pressure and it was taking my enjoyment away from this fic, but i feel rejuvenated now! you're welcome!

sy14 January 17 2012, 01:59:18 UTC

I don't mind the large number of characters, since as you say, they are there because they contribute to the plot in a way. But instead of reading Bourne to Hate leisurely, I feel like I'm studying it. It does require intellectualizing sometimes.

Thanks for the update. Anyways this is a small gift to keep you goin, it's not good enough though.

http://pics.livejournal.com/sy14/pic/00006wep/g1

7daywar January 17 2012, 02:53:01 UTC

yes, yes, that's the point i wanted to make. if they didn't play a role i wouldn't even bother, it is hard keeping up with so many characters so i at least want them to be somewhat useful. and really? i'm not that good at things like this, but i'm so happy that it is making you think! and thank you so much for the gift, especially since it's jaejoong with his blond hair, i miss his blond hair so much! ;_; (hugs)