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Fic: A Hangover You Do Deserve

Dec 19, 2006 22:57

Title: A Hangover You Do Deserve
Author: cryogenia
Characters: Edward and Heiderich
Rating: PG-13 (Gen, Humor)
Prompt: Set 5, #2: the blind leading the blind
Word Count: 1978
Summary: Heiderich has been looking for a way to get his roommate to open up. He finds it in his new best friend - a bottle of vintage German Rum.

( If it were possible he would marry it, but he was certain rum like this was too high-class for a commoner like him. )

cryogenia, ed/heiderich

Comments 14

velvet_mace December 20 2006, 07:36:59 UTC

LMAO!!!!!

Yeah, Ed's life pretty much is implausible in our universe.

cryogenia December 20 2006, 07:52:59 UTC

XD; Yeah, Ed's life story? Especially when he tells it, kind of makes him sound like a Stu XD

aechla December 20 2006, 08:13:36 UTC

OMG, I must run out the door because I'm going to be late for work (new shift = 3:30am to 11am my time), but I COULDN'T STOP READING! I should probably give a less rushed comment when I get home later today, but I couldn't resist letting you know that Ed sucking booze out of his sleeve and Ed/Hei vs. the sun made me laugh out loud and wake up other people in the house. Ooops. XDDD

cryogenia December 20 2006, 08:20:07 UTC

XD; Glad it entertained :) And >_> I would love see Ed sucking booze out of his sleeve, personally.

midnightbanshee December 20 2006, 08:33:58 UTC

*reads*

*re-reads*

*dies laughing*

Edward is a Gary Stu. Except the saddest thing is that all those things really did happen. ;_;
Edward has a way of sounding very unconvincing. XDDDDDD;;

cryogenia December 20 2006, 08:58:39 UTC

XD; Well, granted, for maximum effectiveness, these stories are best told when NOT hammered XD

anonymous December 20 2006, 09:01:13 UTC

I wouldn't buy that story in a million years :) Great work!

brinylon December 20 2006, 09:01:36 UTC

Um, that was me ;p

cuylerjade December 20 2006, 16:01:06 UTC

I loved it! Great job! Poor Ed. Finally tells Alfons his whole sordid life tale but makes the mistake of doing it hammered. Definitely a story best told while sober. (And the Omake... Evil sun. Should have more respect for hangovers! XD)