Ficlet: Birth Announcement (Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter), G

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Title: Birth Announcement
Author: cho_malfoy
Characters: Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter
Summary: The Marauders react to Lily's delicate condition.
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Notes: None

Comments

[mancrave]

traitorous Peter, bah! I've only recently started reading MWPP first war fics and eventhough I know what he does it doesn't stop me from wanting to yell and throw things at him every time! *g*

great ficlet, poor Remus though. I just want to hug him.

[cho_malfoy]

I always have that problem when I write Peter; it infuriates me to no end how he ended up treating people who were his friends. At the same time, I always marvel when writers manage to make Peter sympathetic because it is so hard.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

[secretsolitaire]

Oooh. I especially liked Remus's part. :-(

[cho_malfoy]

Thanks. Poor Remus's life is so hard.

[opheliet]

Oh wow this was great! I love the little glimpses of each one of them, and especially Peter's little bit, how he can have these two separate thoughts- he's betraying them while at the same time thinking about Harry's birth. Beautiful. And Remus's section made me ache- poor thing :( Fantastic job!

[cho_malfoy]

Thank you very much! I'm glad it worked for you.

[islandsmoke]

sneak him his first Busty Witches mags...

Meep!

Loved Peter and Remus. ;)

[cho_malfoy]

Sirius would totally be the corrupting influence if he got the chance. :D

Thanks!

[sambethe]

Each of these was great and felt fitting to each of them. I especially liked Remus' and Lily's. And this:

and okay, she was, but chasing Death Eaters never felt real.

What a lovely little insight I hadn't thought about before.

[cho_malfoy]

I'm really glad you liked Lily's part because I think hers was my favorite to write. I also enjoy thinking that Lily would still find it completely weird to be a part of the wizarding world, even though she had a good half of her life to get used to it.