Ficlet: Birth Announcement (Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter), G

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Title: Birth Announcement
Author: cho_malfoy
Characters: Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter
Summary: The Marauders react to Lily's delicate condition.
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Notes: None

Comments

[werewolfsfan]

Very interesting and true to what their times and circumstances really were rather than the usual fluff piece. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into the characterizations and situations. Good job.

[cho_malfoy]

Thanks a lot. I love fluff, but I end up gravitating to the thoughtful or dark situations almost every time. Hee.

[mindabbles]

Very interesting. Like others, I particularly liked Remus' part.

[cho_malfoy]

Thanks. I'm glad that you and others did like Remus's sections; I think it's really obvious that he's my favorite Harry Potter character.

[snegurochka_lee]

Oh, I love these different reactions! Lily is perfect - "I'm not old enough"; James's nervousness, oh, typical man! Sirius - his first Busty Witches mag! Ahahahahah! I love that shout-out to his biker girl posters on the wall at Grimmauld. ;) Remus, oh my God, my poor Remus. That was perfect for him. And Peter's just killed me! The banality of evil, indeed. That gave me shivers!

[cho_malfoy]

Aw, your comment is so great! I'm glad that everything worked so well for you, and thanks for reading. :D

[such_heights]

Oh, God. Perfect and really heart-breaking by the end. Wonderfully done!

[cho_malfoy]

Wow, I totally didn't notice until just now that you commented on this. *headdesk* Oh well, it took me forever to respond to these comments, so that's my fault.

Anyway! I'm glad you liked it. And I love your icon; talk about heart-breaking.

[minnow_53]

I do enjoy grown-up Marauders, especially when they include godfather-to-be Sirius. And a wonderfully ambivalent Peter. Bittersweet and thought-provoking.

[cho_malfoy]

I really like grown-up Marauders, too, especially considering they didn't get long to be grown-up together. (Sniffle.) Thank you for reading.