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i wrote a poem about home, and about my sister. our theme is home in my class. it was hard to write, and i have to work out a lot of little things on it, but as i was writing it i cried. i dont know why. ive never been moved to tears when writing something, but it was a powerful experience. im debating whether i want to give it to my sister as part

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[linusglasses]

LOVE the poem. it reminds me of my family. great job :)

[__daylightfades]

thank you :)

[myfavoritescar]

i absolutely loved this, honestly. the fourth stanza is perfection.

[__daylightfades]

well thank you! :)

[akihayden]

i like how it lacks pretension. it's beautiful! i was almost crying when i got to the end.

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thanks aki. i am glad everybody likes it.

[milsta]

well, i WAS crying when i got to the end. and i don't even have a sister. god damn, sara, you're too good.

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thanks millie. it was moving to write. :)