"He never even looks into the steam-face of the ticket girl but he passes me a glance. (He’s there alone.) I turn around to condense my breath on the window and finally write that I’m not alone, I promise, and through the glass I see Adam running, slipping, and falling onto the gritty ice. I rush outside and the steam-girl smiles, I think."
is my favorite part. making her the "steam-girl" was a really clever decision.
thanks, it was all kind of forced but i'm glad my class is forcing me to do it. and i hope that was intentional, i don't remember (ha, ha.) thanks for commenting though, nice to know someone reads this anymore, haha.
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"He never even looks into the steam-face of the ticket girl but he passes me a glance. (He’s there alone.)
I turn around to condense my breath on the window and finally write that I’m not alone, I promise, and through the glass I see Adam running, slipping, and falling onto the gritty ice. I rush outside and the steam-girl smiles, I think."
is my favorite part. making her the "steam-girl" was a really clever decision.
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thanks for commenting though, nice to know someone reads this anymore, haha.
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