It was really good, x20. =O I liked it a lot. ^-^; You should keep writing, although it's soooo creepy. XP; I still loved it. ^-^; I didn't actually expect it to be that good. o.o; It read like a book, instead of like a random story written by a teenager. o.o;
...Wow...eccoblackfinSeptember 24 2005, 23:36:16 UTC
..It was great. I loved it, and I insist you write much more often. Honestly, it's fantastic. On a more business-like level, you could use an editor to clear up the typos and whatnot. Other than that, it's great. Congrats!
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I liked it a lot. ^-^; You should keep writing, although it's soooo creepy. XP; I still loved it. ^-^; I didn't actually expect it to be that good. o.o;
It read like a book, instead of like a random story written by a teenager. o.o;
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It's very creepy... but I think that's why I'm enjoying writing it... like, if I didn't write it.. I'd actually enjoy the story. o.o;
It's alot like Lolita
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I'm trying to get my mom to take me to Best Buy so I can buy Lolita (the movie).
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I really think you'd enjoy the book if you enjoyed creepy-Spike. o.o;
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On a more business-like level, you could use an editor to clear up the typos and whatnot. Other than that, it's great.
Congrats!
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But, I'm glad you enjoy it and it's creepy factor! I'm typing the second chapter right now!
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Pedophelia never sounded so good. Wonderful work.
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