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[__untilsundown]

please don't read this if you don't want...it's graphic.

Comments

[__500miles]

that. was. deffinitely the best story you've ever written. by far. wow. at some points i almost cried. some parts made me so so happy, the part where he took her to the field, that was so cute. and some parts reminded me of me, i think at the begining with the charlie thing, where she hated him but a day didnt go by where she didnt think about him. and oh it was so cute how she couldnt stop smiling when they were dancing. and then the end just made me really grateful to have someone like you and not like him. and so even though it was sad it made me happy. it was so so good colin. the only thing thats kind of, weird i guess, is that i dont think eyeliner would break a mirror. but thats just a little thing, it was still a really cute and amazing story. i lovve you!!1

[papercut_hearts]

that was really amazing. i really liked the way you repeated that part in the beginning about being a swimmer. the part when they were in the field made me really happy and made me think about how nice it would be to experience something like that. this is probably one of the best stories, i really liked the way you ended it.

<3

[jessboski1305]

you wrote this?
it's absolutley amazing, Colin. Wow. I really liked it. especialliy how you ended it with the swimming part. wow I can't believe you wrote that..
<333

[bad_days]

That was amazing. I was just like...blown away. Wow.

-Phil

[_yourotherleft]

that was absolutely incredible, thanks so much for sharing it!
<333