Stranded, Chapter 4

[_alicesprings]

Title: Stranded
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Luke and Reid are on their way to their honeymoon when their plane hits some turbulence...
Author's Notes: I wrote the first draft of this for NaNoWriMo, which was a great challenge and lots of fun! I didn’t reach the 50k word count goal, but the fic is now complete and I'll be posting a chapter a

Comments

[csmars]

we need lucinja to the rescue, STAT!!!

[_alicesprings]

Hee! We do! :D

[nancygrew]

Great fic. So much suspense. I love that you included the fact that Luke needs anti-rejection meds and that he's now out. And the shark scare scene was really well-written.

[_alicesprings]

Thank you so much! So pleased you're enjoying it! :D

[smittle]

Love this so much! So suspenseful and richly detailed. It's so great that they got to have another "first" time, followed by so many more times. That was the most romantic "shut up" I have ever read. Amazing fic.

[_alicesprings]

Aww, thank you for the lovely feedback! So happy you liked it! :D

[dpracket]

First of all, bravo for making the seatbelt thing believable. Now the panic makes sense...of course Reid would freeze up. He's claustrophobic, AND his parents were killed by a train. And then you went and FIXED that shizz too, so thank you, thank you, thank you.

The sex is amazingly hot, and I like that it was the thought of losing Reid that made Luke give into his feelings.

I know Reid is hoping that Luke can love him someday, but I think Luke is already there.

Luke saying that he's sorry is just so Luke, and the "shut up" is perfect, because that is very much Reid.

Now hurry up and get them rescued, please, though I love angst and will enjoy if it is drawn out a little.

Thanks for sharing this story!

[marsabi]

I agree with dpracket on all the fixes here, the hot sex, and the "shut up" line. Another great chapter!

[_alicesprings]

Thank you so much! :D

[_alicesprings]

Aww, thank you so much for this wonderful feedback! So happy you enjoyed the seat belt thing!

Luke saying that he's sorry is just so Luke, and the "shut up" is perfect, because that is very much Reid.

Yay! Always good to hear they're IC! Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy the final chapter too! :D

[vision_m]

After all that it still comes down to Luke's last pill to really make them start worrying about what may be in store for them if they don't get him to land and more of those pills in him. I am just completely worried now for them and hope that someone comes for them soon cause I can't imagine how Reid would react if Luke goes into renal failure while on the island.

Great chapter

[_alicesprings]

Thank you very much! Hope you enjoy the final chapter, you will get all your questions answered. :D