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Stranded, Chapter 4

Dec 17, 2011 07:54

Title: Stranded
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Luke and Reid are on their way to their honeymoon when their plane hits some turbulence...
Author's Notes: I wrote the first draft of this for NaNoWriMo, which was a great challenge and lots of fun! I didn’t reach the 50k word count goal, but the fic is now complete and I'll be posting a chapter a ( Read more... )

luke/reid, my fic

Comments 43

1faghag December 17 2011, 15:14:17 UTC

Girl you are killing me!!!! He's out of pills!!!!!!! OMG!!! Please fix this I can't take it anymore!!!!!!! You my dear are a bloody brilliant writer!!!!!

_alicesprings December 17 2011, 21:23:44 UTC

LOL! I fixed it! The final chapter is up! :D

Thank you very much! You're very generous!

ludagurl3d December 17 2011, 15:26:32 UTC

This was so hot, and so sweet at the same time. I desperately hope Luke gets his memory back, but I like that Reid realizes that this Luke is still *his* Luke, regardless.

OMG, the pills though D:

_alicesprings December 17 2011, 21:24:39 UTC

Thank you so much! Yeah, I wanted Reid to realise the memories don't really matter, he's still Luke. Glad you liked it! :D

astrolatryae December 17 2011, 19:11:47 UTC

Alice you're killing me.

First and foremost: it goes without saying both "FINALLY!" and "This was so incredibly hot I think I burned up."

“Mine too,” Luke says, referring to his transplant scar. “But you’re shaking?” Luke asks, confused.

Reid rolls his eyes. “Because it’s you,” he whispers, his face radiating heat, and love.

My heart. Gah!

After dinner, they curl up by the fire and exchange soft, lingering kisses for a while. Luke sighs, and closes his eyes, resting his head on Reid's chest. Reid's fingers card through his hair, massaging Luke's scalp, and he practically purrs in contentment. "Feels good," Luke murmurs, as exhaustion starts to take over his body. His mind turns back to his meds. Six more pills. Six more days. They've been out here for more than three weeks and haven't seen or heard another human being or spotted a rescue plane or boat. Luke swallows hard. If it wasn't for his kidney, they could survive out here indefinitely, there wouldn't be a countdown hanging over their heads. But because of Luke's stupidity ( ... )

_alicesprings December 17 2011, 21:26:35 UTC

Awww, thank you for the wonderful feedback, bb! So happy with the bits you quoted! Thrilled to hear it's IC! :D

Kill Luke??? You know me better than that! Last part is up, I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you so much! :D

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_alicesprings December 22 2011, 01:50:57 UTC

Aww, thank you! So glad to hear it hit some emotional notes for you! *hands tissues* :)

luvflix December 28 2011, 02:09:16 UTC

OMG!!! I misread your intro, I thought that when you said the fic was finished I thought chapter 4 was the final chapter!!! Nooooooo!! As deleriously happy as I am right now that this wonderful story is going to last longer than 4 chapters, I need you to HURRY and post the next chapter NOW!!!! *pretty please?*

_alicesprings December 28 2011, 03:28:19 UTC

I'm not sure where you're looking... but the next chapter was indeed posted. Here's the link: http://users.livejournal.com/_alicesprings/378782.html

luvflix December 28 2011, 12:53:15 UTC

Don't mind me......yes I'm THAT big of an idiot!!! I could blame it on my useless phone with the 2 inch screen that I didn't read the ch no.s properly, or I could just take it as an incredibly blonde moment and quietly move on to ch 5 *blushes*....