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[_amore_perfetto]

Alright you all have to comment on my poem and tell me your favorite parts or if you even liked it. (Note-NOT FINAL COPY)

Comments

[collageofcolor]

I like that alot. Very well done.
I write poetry, too. But mainly I write short stories/books.
Nice.

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[painfullysweet1]

do not change a thing
plus it will be like changing your feelings
i think you've got something.
*hug*

[outspokendork]

And I’m just so desperate
For an answer to my internal tears
<<3 favorite part.

Im going to ruin the poem lol

[suntan_smile]

I love it this is my favorite part...

A rose of deception
And thorns that make pretty pictures

it like speaks to me lol. I like the word deception and thorn and pretty. Oh and pictures!!!!

Now lol Im going to ruin the entire thing not on purpose but thats just the way I am...

Lol You need to make that a music video I can just picture you putting together a puzzle minding your own business when alex comes in and jumps on the table ruins your puzzle and then laughs evily and then you crawl up to your mom who turns you away. then you go upstairs crying and amber and jenna come in and laugh at you and tease you. then you go on a mad homicide and kill your entire family except for jenna and you train her to be your daughter and I have an image of her on your hip as you walk away from the scene of the crime and lay a red rose on the ashes of the house which you burned to make sure there was no evidence. :) sweet I need to make a music video lol.

Re: Im going to ruin the poem lol

[_amore_perfetto]

Oh my lord Britt, you truly need your head checked.

Re: Im going to ruin the poem lol

[suntan_smile]

Lol I know... I just don't have enough money to go get it checked yet.