These Palms Are Cupped Like Shovels

Apr 16, 2008 22:47

Title: These Palms Are Cupped Like Shovels
Author: nieded
Fandom; Pairing(s): Torchwood; Ianto-centric, colors of Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa
Rating: PG-13 for language
Disclaimer: Am in no way affiliated with RTD and BBC
Spoilers: Mostly Cyberwoman and Exit Wound. The story isn’t directly related to the episodes, however.
Word Count: 8,800
Author’s Notes: AU ( Read more... )

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louiex April 17 2008, 05:26:11 UTC
What a wonderful kind of hurt you've conjured in my heart~ Not every day that I read a fic and actually let out an audible wibble then an 'ow'. Amazingly done, the scenes play together perfectly and just yeah... I'm kind of speechless and need to go hug something for a bit.

Great, great story~

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nieded April 17 2008, 15:20:10 UTC
Wow, thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them. :D

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falleneos April 17 2008, 05:33:25 UTC
Oh, this was so heartbreakingly gorgeous. This is the second fic thats brought me to tears today.

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nieded April 17 2008, 15:21:03 UTC
Thank you!

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human_analog April 17 2008, 07:07:14 UTC
This was lovely and sincerely original of the pairing and genre. Thank you so much for writing it. <3

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nieded April 17 2008, 15:21:55 UTC
This was lovely and sincerely original of the pairing and genre.

Wow, that's a flooring compliment. Thank you very much. <3

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astaria51 April 17 2008, 09:16:28 UTC
This was beautifully written, and wonderfully interwoven, but OW, my HEART. *sigh*

Thank you for some really good TW fic, though, as wibbly as it made me.

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nieded April 17 2008, 15:22:52 UTC
Thanks for reading; I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as you did! :D

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erin_giles April 17 2008, 11:43:45 UTC
*is trying not to cry and failing* That was just amazing. Heartbreakingly wonderful! I loved how you interwove the stories throughout and the repatition of certain images and the metaphorical tunnel/real tunnel... Wonderful piece!

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nieded April 17 2008, 15:23:41 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the tunnel worked well for you. I was cautious about using it since it's such a cliche and worked hard to put a spin on it. Thanks so much for reading!

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