when i awake.i promise.this.you.you will be real.

[_prettyplease]

I kissed a miserable boy who tastes of cigarettes
old records in the background
and scars across his wrists
a lip so innocent pierced
a mind so jaded confused and lost
I shuddered at his touch
"undress"

he said as he held up my un-tainted face
pulled at my skirt
I faltered, felt my legs begin to shake.
so this is what its like to be weak
I wish I was your

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[eyelineryou]

thank you so much livvers

[obsessedwithpan]

*stunned in wonderment to the beauty of your writing*

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[_prettyplease]

pffff

yer to nice

thank u much much queen vern

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[obsessedwithpan]

praise me for i know and rule all. hehehehe- slaht lahve

[_the_last]

*naked*

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[obsessedwithpan]

hahahah...

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[_prettyplease]

*hmmmf*

[the_rockstarr]

i think i remember that, did u post it on ur other lj like a long time ago
it was awesome, i really like that one

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[loveatfirstsite]

monika omg u are such a good writer. ever thought of publishing? it took my breath away...no joke

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[_prettyplease]

lexie every thought of stop being the sweatest girl ever?

no, i dont think i could publish.

thank you so much

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[_prettyplease]

yep
awhile ago

thank u much

[hackingasodacan]

that was really good. i rarely ever comment poems and songs people port here because i don't like a lot, but that was amazing. :]

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[_prettyplease]

thank you lots.
um, im glad u didnt like any of my other poems?

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[hackingasodacan]

haha i didn't mean that :[. i'm just rarely shocked, your a really good writer. :]

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[eyelineryou]

hah,
well i couldnt mind if u did mean that.
but thank you