when i awake.i promise.this.you.you will be real.

[_prettyplease]

I kissed a miserable boy who tastes of cigarettes
old records in the background
and scars across his wrists
a lip so innocent pierced
a mind so jaded confused and lost
I shuddered at his touch
"undress"

he said as he held up my un-tainted face
pulled at my skirt
I faltered, felt my legs begin to shake.
so this is what its like to be weak
I wish I was your

Comments

[psychoticlyrics]

*in awe*

Re:

[_prettyplease]

::shush::

thank u

Re:

[psychoticlyrics]

::never shushing::
more than welcome
~Trish

crazy things one does instead of writing an essay

[lost_inthe_sink]

ummm i'm bored and up at 3:15. even though you don't really know me i decided reading your amazing poems would be a fun thing to do. so i did. you are a marvelous writer. and i especially love this poem. i'm not quite sure why. i just really love it. eek i tried to find a quote or a line or two i really like. but truthfully the whole thing just catches my eye. and my mind. and my heart.
i hope this comment wasn't too weird or anything. if it wasn't. may i add you?
~.~courtney~.~

[spiffiesimba]

because of procrastination (haha yes!) i just happened upon ur poetry livejournal . . . this is insane, your so talented! there are no words. . .
:) *xoxo*

[anonymous]

Most people dont know the meaning of this..but when its happened to you...then u know what it really means..what it really feels like...monika these are are amazing