Day #2 - Who Bit Ya, Baby Sister?

[poorfrances]

Day 2: Who Bit Ya, Baby Sister?
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: None of this really happened, and this is not meant to represent the real John Lennon or Paul McCartney. These are charactersA/N: After rereading the end of chapter 1, I wasn't sure of the exact time of day the boys were at. So I just ran with the notion that it was late afternoon, because I

Comments

[oh_johnny_]

Yay! Day 2!

Wonderful job. I really liked Paul's musings about Dot, and the whole conversation with Augustin.

"Merveilleux! Someday, I will hear one of your songs in a nightclub, yes? And say I met you on your famous trip to Paris."

That line was just perfect.

[poorfrances]

Thanks! I really admired Olivia's way of writing John in the first chapter, so that's probably why he sleeps through most of my chapter. ;) I'm more comfortable writing Paul.

[olivia_y]

Much as I'd like to take credit for the first chapter - I didn't write it! Credit goes to thisbe!^^

A nitpick about the subject line, can you please have a look at the posting format (http://www.livejournal.com/community/_two_of_us_/1546.html#cutid1)? Thank you!

(Man I'm so sleepy)

[poorfrances]

Oh, yeah, thanks.

Well, thisbe wrote John so well!

[thisbe]

I loved John's poem :)
Very well done!

[nyprincesslinz]

First off kudos to the author, great job! Ok now I have a stupid question...John and Paul are together right? They do have a special sexual realtionship going on right? Or is that not happened yet? That's the only thing that has me confused! GREAT WORK CAN'T WAIT FOR THEN NEXT BIT!

[oh_johnny_]

Sex has not happened yet. At this point they don't even know they're hot for each other (silly boys!). Keep reading though, because Stuff will definitely happen at some point on this trip.

[catnip_martini]

Fabulous job, luv. :) Very very nice.

Cate

[lrita]

FABulous!!, i like this chapter as i liked the first one!!
it´s gonna be a great story!! i cna´t wait till the next part ;)