Comments | a_crimson_tear: If I bled myself dry, would you merely complain of the blood?

a_crimson_tear

If I bled myself dry, would you merely complain of the blood?

Jul 22, 2004 01:30

Random small poetry.

Note: I erased these because they kinda sucked =( As in: REALLY SUCKED =D

Comments 7

samn kissoffire July 22 2004, 08:15:53 UTC

thats like shit AND damn.
its not cheezey if it makes my eyes water up.
which it did.
nice.

Re: samn a_crimson_tear July 22 2004, 16:56:19 UTC

Serious? thanks dude, I thought it was like the shittiest poem I've ever written =( *shrug* its good to have a second opinion tho, so I'll leave it up =D

...your love hurt like a million bitter sweet cuts... tinx1888 July 22 2004, 20:41:45 UTC

Hey spiffy! ;-)

I'm feelin the poem... and you need to update more often too!--so there???!!! cause I said so. that's why...

luv ya hun.
Gena*

p.s. it was really cool hanging out with last night. I haden't seen you in forevah!

::kisses::

monothevirus July 23 2004, 03:04:41 UTC

of course, take it down before i have a chance to read....

...asshole.

oh well, i'm sure another emo moment will come your way and i'll have some poetry to read once again!

a_crimson_tear July 23 2004, 03:05:36 UTC

I just rewrote my title and the links to comments pages so quiet you =) BTW, they aren't song lyrics like you thought they were. I r made them

fallenangel904 July 23 2004, 19:42:17 UTC

Jake, I love you!!! I miss haning out with you soooo much.....You are such a gerat guy...come out to georgia and see me...hehe...tootles

~Jackie

l3tsplaydr3ssup July 24 2004, 02:24:11 UTC

did u know that i like toast...yes i do