FIC: What Won't Die (L/K, rated K+)

Dec 27, 2006 01:18

Title: What Won't Die ( Read more... )

fic, bsg

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tracyj23 January 12 2007, 15:33:06 UTC
Wow and I mean WOW!!! This was amazing!

I haven't seen you at ff.net lately and thought maybe you'd stopped writing ( not that I've been there much either) but your review of my latest story made me look to see if you had a lj - and I found it!

Your little snippets are so good - weaving actual show canon with imagination (and perhaps spoilers) was fantastic. Latte is right - you write the best angst. :)
(I'm a little teary myself)

I'm friending you and I should let you know in case you're interested that I have another journal specifically for my bsg writings though most of my archived one are still at the tracyj23 one. It's http://stardust_20.livejournal.com/

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abelard369 January 13 2007, 01:30:25 UTC
Thank you so, so much for your feedback - since you are one of my favorite BSG writers EVER, your fb really means so much to me!!! I have friended you in return :). I am so glad you have an archive of your stuff. I do intend to do more writing soon, but frakking real life is really frakking up my fic writing plans, and has been doing so for a while. But thanks for visiting my newest stuff, even if it is so short. Hope to see more from you very soon, too!!

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dionusia April 2 2007, 07:19:04 UTC
OK, so I'm late to the party. I'm new to LJ, that's my excuse.

These are fabulous! So much I liked, it's hard to single things out, but I especially appreciated #3, because I felt something like that should have been shown onscreen, and you capture Lee's concern for her so perfectly. #8, Her hell will be knowing what losing her has done to him, is completely Kara, and hits me right in the gut.

And finally, the last one really makes me tear up. I can completely see how that would happen, Lee not having anyone else to turn to, to display his grief. Great job.

Would you mind if I friended you? I'd hate to miss anything else you might write.

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abelard369 April 4 2007, 17:32:06 UTC
I would love it if you friended me, and I will friend you in return! Thank you for reading and commenting, you've made my day :). I look forward to reading more from you.

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dionusia April 5 2007, 00:07:35 UTC
Glad to hear it...and about looking forward to reading more, right back at you! We need some serious fic to tide us over through the hiatus, you know. (Uhm. I just need to find my muse first. Where'd she go?)

I do have some rather insane BSG crack-poems I've been writing, but it's just not the same as fic. Esp. L/K fic.

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spinkkitty June 2 2007, 14:05:13 UTC
This is so heartbreakingly lovely.

My favourite bits are:
But a year and a half or a century and a half could not stop him from wanting her, from wanting her to be his. Please stop loving me, Lee, please stop, she found herself wishing at night. But not with her whole heart. Or any of it, really.

It was only when his mind came into play, with its sneaky talk of ethics, morals, commitments, and its insidious plan of divorce, re-marriage, possession, ownership, that it was over. His body would never forgive him, never. His heart voiced no opinion, being somewhere else entirely, beating in the body of a woman he'd never own.

GAH the angst! the glorious angst!

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abelard369 June 23 2007, 17:23:48 UTC
Thank you so much!! I am so sorry for taking so long to reply to your comment; I just got back from a long-ish trip. I am so pleased that you liked this! Hopefully, I can get around to some awesome Kara resurrection fic later this summer (and also finish my many WIPs!). Thanks for reading and commenting.

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arkady_ January 8 2009, 23:54:15 UTC
I love number 7 & 9. I love the way he vomits when realising she doesn't have her anymore or their child-to-be, but instead she's dead.

Greatly written, thanks for sharing. =)

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abelard369 March 8 2009, 06:31:53 UTC
I'm not sure my response to your beautiful fb posted the way it should have, so I'm posting again: Thank yo so much for your comments!! I hope to get back to writing Kara/Lee soon, in honor of the final season :). I really appreciate your feedback, thanks!!

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abelard369 March 8 2009, 06:32:13 UTC
Oh man, I never replied to this gorgeous comment?!?!!!??!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for your wonderful fb and for reccing this!!!!! Fantastic. Only one more ep to go now and I am crossing my fingers HARD for some Starbuck/Apollo lovin'. Or at least the hint that the lovin' will begin once the credits roll, or something. Thank you again!!

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