Prison of the Mind

[ablueskier]

Ok, I know you all are totally tired of analyzing from school, but please, read this and tell me what you see in it.  I'd love to hear your input and if you like it or not.

“Prison of the Mind”

Quietly she sneaks down the hall; no one is there.  Up ahead there is an open door; no one is there.  A little more briskly now she heads for

Comments

[longlostblue]

Interesting... I like.

[rosemusic]

wow...that was awesome...granted, sad, but very interesting

wonderful...

[hpgoonie123]

I love it. Your writing is great. Very cool 8)

__laura

[mad_about_dan]

Very good, I liked it =D you are very talented writting.