Comments | abracah: Challenge Entry 16

abracah

Challenge Entry 16

Jul 18, 2011 15:46

Challenge 16 from the Whump thread was to write a fic in which we ( Read more... )

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gw_libero July 18 2011, 20:04:42 UTC

I just knew that you would choose Elizabeth and so I could leave her in your capable hands. Love that you combined the thoughts of the two women - great job!

abracah July 18 2011, 20:13:06 UTC

LOL!! I couldn't NOT choose her. She showed so much emotion. Teyla was there through the whole ordeal so for me it was a balance to show both women's reactions.

I am glad you liked it. It was a great challenge for me.

sgafan July 18 2011, 21:16:11 UTC

Lovely work! I really enjoyed both POVs. :D

abracah July 18 2011, 21:21:39 UTC

Thank you so much!!

syfyfan July 18 2011, 21:51:52 UTC

Great work! I really liked it!

abracah July 18 2011, 23:36:12 UTC

Thanks. I am glad you liked it!!!

mathgirl24 July 18 2011, 22:47:27 UTC

Hi, it's JT-2 from GW. Just wanted to say this is brilliant! I loved both ladies' POVs. You got their voices down perfectly. Nice job!

(yes, I'm still lurking)

abracah July 18 2011, 23:34:29 UTC

I thought I recognized the user name. Stop lurking and come play. We only bite Shep.

Thanks for reading. I am glad you liked the Teyla one too. I never right her because I feel I don't know her as well. That is a shame since she was on for almost 100 episodes.

tam_myst July 18 2011, 23:56:37 UTC

Good job!

abracah July 19 2011, 01:19:44 UTC

Thanks!