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abracah

Challenge 28

Oct 09, 2011 23:13

This week's Challenge was to write a short fic from a Villain's POV as Sheppard is getting whumped ( Read more... )

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Comments 19

gw_libero October 10 2011, 03:24:04 UTC

I love it, Pocus!!!
You're right - no one can beat him as good as he himself!
Wonderful last thought ...

abracah October 11 2011, 01:51:21 UTC

Glad you liked it. Even after all the years he was on Atlantis, I still think he thought it was his job to make sure everyone was safe, but he didn't need to be. His friends thought differently!!

sgafan October 10 2011, 03:34:24 UTC

ooh, that's good! :D

abracah October 11 2011, 01:51:43 UTC

Thanks for reading!!

scifan1 October 10 2011, 04:52:18 UTC

Oh well done!! Gotta always love Doppelganger. :D

abracah October 11 2011, 01:52:09 UTC

Thank you! Doppelganger is one of my favorite eps!

scifan1 October 11 2011, 10:23:07 UTC

Hee hee. Mine too. How can you not like double Shep.. and Whump. :D

mathgirl24 October 10 2011, 14:04:14 UTC

Very nice! I hadn't thought about the crystal thing as a villain. Great use of the prompt! Poor John.

abracah October 11 2011, 01:52:56 UTC

Thank you!! I was trying for a different twist. Glad I thought of it!!! Glad you liked it!!

tam_myst October 10 2011, 14:15:59 UTC

Great job!

abracah October 11 2011, 01:53:15 UTC

Thanks for reading!!