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Fanfic - Extremely Lazy Napping (Improv-a-Ganza)

Jul 28, 2011 19:37

Title: Extremely Lazy Napping
Author: Mel (accordingtomel)
Characters/Pairings: Jeff/Chip
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,176
Disclaimer: All fake. Every word. No offense is meant to anyone in this fic or anyone reading it. I’m just having fun.
Prompt: #144 - Jeff/Chip cuddles after a show on the bus.
Author’s note: Once again, written for the Whose-a-Thon challenge ( Read more... )

improv-a-ganza, jeff/chip, fanfic

Comments 39

csinygirl July 29 2011, 01:12:45 UTC

I have never actually commented on your LJ but i had to say

I LOVE your Fanfics i know i always tell you this but they are AWESOME as always

so Of Course this is Awesome to i Loved it and was going aww sometimes it was cute

accordingtomel July 29 2011, 02:00:02 UTC

Thanks so much, hon! I know you enjoy my fics, and I thank you for always being so sweet and telling me, regardless of where that is (whether here or on tumblr). I'm glad you enjoyed this one too. Thanks for your kindness :D

The show report/fan-meeting report, and OTP post are still coming soon, BTW, in case you were wondering :).

zeropercent July 29 2011, 01:59:57 UTC

♥__♥ OH LORD.

I love all of this. Jeff falling asleep on Chip is so something he would do. I feel like he probably has done that before.

And Greg and Ryan's conversation about their relationship was spot on.

I WANT TO HUG THIS FIC.

accordingtomel July 29 2011, 02:04:58 UTC

LOL! Thank you, darling :D. I'm so pleased that you liked this. I have no doubt in my mind that Jeff has fallen asleep on Chip in the past, and this is just my brain's warped way of interpreting how I like to imagine it could go down, haha ;)

So glad to hear that this was a satisfying read for you. It's kind of pointless fluff that goes nowhere, but it was fun to write. Thanks for the kindness, as always. I'm super pleased that you enjoyed it! ♥

Also, I keep meaning to tell you that I LOVE your icon. I need to get myself an icon from that epic scene of epicness. Anyway...;)

zeropercent July 29 2011, 02:17:07 UTC

Pointless fluff is perfect fluff C:

Oooh I'm flattered. It took me a while to make. All of the Chip/Jeff icons that you use are just asdfghjkl

sheesusnat July 29 2011, 03:15:39 UTC

I just love the way you write these two so damn much, it always comes across as believable and plausible, while also being romantic and sweet. You have a really, really good grasp of their characterizations. I hope you keep writing! :)

accordingtomel July 29 2011, 22:35:47 UTC

Thank you so much! Honestly, that means the world to me to know that you think I have a good grasp of the characterizations. As I've probably mentioned before, it's something I strive really hard to do, so it's satisfying to hear that you felt I've done it. I can't thank you enough for your kindness, and I don't think you could drag me away from this ship any time in the near future, LOL ;)

clayangel July 29 2011, 06:19:52 UTC

I'm supposed to be going to bed, but I've been looking forward to this for DAYS, and I can't sleep without reading it...

Sometimes Chip wonders if Jeff ever actually learned what ‘personal space’ is-*smirk* I know, right? ^_^

Aw, they're so cute. ^_^ I love the image of them cuddled together like that. And I love your Ryan and Greg, too. They're just spot on. Oh, and it's so cute how Chip is all protective of Jeff, with the petting and the hugging. ^_^ That was just the cutest thing. Leaves me all warm and squishy. ^__^

accordingtomel July 29 2011, 22:41:48 UTC

Wow! I don't think I've ever had anyone actually looking forward to my writing, so thank you! That means so much to me :D.

I so love that Jeff has no sense of personal space whatsoever. I find it insanely endearing, and I love to bring it up as much as humanly possible in every context I can, LOL ;)

I'm really glad that you liked this! I've got more angsty stuff in the works, so I think I've been craving some fluff for these two. I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed this, though. And yay for warm and squishy feelings! Thanks again for you kindness! :D

clayangel July 30 2011, 08:11:30 UTC

Ooh, ooh. Something reminded me of this just now. I do show reports for all the shows I go to, and in last year's we have a video of Jeff saying to Chip "God, I love working with you." ^_^ I though you might get a kick out of that. Here's the full report and video downloads if you're interested: http://clayangel.livejournal.com/291680.html

accordingtomel July 30 2011, 14:49:20 UTC

Oooh! Awesome!! You know, surprisingly, I actually heard about that on tumblr. Though your post is f-locked... Then again, I suppose someone else from the show could've also shared the information. But anyway, I'd LOVE to actually see/hear Jeff say that. Gah, how are they so adorable? I seriously couldn't ship them harder if I tried \o/

Thanks so much for sharing! Downloading that one particular video at the moment (even though my internet is being REALLY slow) :D

mcghengland_xx July 29 2011, 08:19:13 UTC

.....OMG YOU SHOULD JUST WRITE A FIC FOR EVERY JEFF/CHIP PROMPT IN THE WHOSE-A-THON CHALLENGE !

very amazing as always - so beautiful, well-written, and adorable ! <3 ;D

sungreen70 July 29 2011, 14:57:23 UTC

I totally adore your writing, you know. I squeed when I saw you had posted a new fic :)

I love the way you write Chip, with his inner confusion over his feelings for Jeff. And Jeff, with his not so secret crush on Chip, and total disregard for personal space - both portrayals seem VERY in character for what we see on IAG and in live shows.

The cuddling was just so warm and fuzzy, and I especially loved this: Jeff jerks slightly in Chip’s arms, and instinctively, he starts to rub circles into Jeff’s lower back with his thumb until he stills once more It shows him as protective and caring of Jeff despite his confusion, which I also think is realistic.

And Greg and Ryan were awesomely obnoxious with the teasing, but you followed that up with their conversation in which they're clearly supportive of the other two and genuinely want them to be happy.

Once again, loved this fic and hope for more from you soon!!

accordingtomel July 29 2011, 22:54:57 UTC

Thank you so, so much for your awesome feedback! You always leave such lovely, wonderful comments for me!

It makes me incredibly happy to hear that you felt the characterizations of all 4 of them were consistent with what we know of their personalities. Characterization is my biggest thing when writing fic, so it's awesome to hear when people feel I've been able to do it.

Glad you liked the part about Jeff's not-so-secret crush on Chip and his lack of personal space, because those are seriously two of the things I adore about Jeff the most, particularly in relation to Chip. He's sort of a wear-you-heart-on-your-sleeve type of guy, so it's fun to write him like that.

Also, I love cuddling. So any time when I have an excuse to write it into fic, the happier I am, LOL! ;) I could totally see Greg and Ryan being all snarky and teasing, but ultimately, they both care a lot about Jeff and Chip too, so I think they'd be supportive :)

Anyway, thank you so very much! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this! :D

accordingtomel July 29 2011, 22:44:27 UTC

OMG YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW TEMPTING THAT THOUGHT IS! :D

I won't, obviously, because I'd never be able to. But I seriously have been pretty much flailing non-stop since this thing came out and all the prompts were inspiring to me!

Anyway, thanks so much! It makes me so happy to hear that you enjoyed this (and all my other fics). Thanks for your continued support/kindness! :D

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